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Makai Kasai
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Join date : 2011-07-06
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| Name: Makai Kasai Nickname/Alias: Meimukami no Makai (Makai the God of Illusions) Age: 35 Gender: Male Looks: - Spoiler:
Makai is a seven foot and five inch tall male weighing around two hundred and fifty-five pounds. He has an athletic build but average size muscles. His muscles are compacted having been designed to be perfect allowing him to wield his swords with one hand with ease. His skin is pale whiter than snow. Makai's eyes are pitch black with blood red like slits for iris. His face is always in a neutral position giving him an intimidating appearance. He has no emotion what so ever in his eyes making it when someone glances inside all they see is the pitch darkness. They are filled by a void of darkness a cold shiver being sent through there body. Makai often wears black hakame style pants with a long sleeved Kimono like black top. The sleeeves of his Kimono are longer than his hands reaching ten centimetres from his fingers allowing the sleeves to dangle. The end's of his sleeves the insides are coated with metal allowing him to deflect incoming weapons with them. He wears black tabi and basic black Shinobi sandels. Around his waist he has a blood red obi sash with two item pouches at the back stocked with kunai, shuriken and assorted other ninja tools. On each leg he has two holsters containing shuriken, kunai and senbon. His hair is pitch black and spiked reaching mid back held in a high ponytail. He has a few stray bangs shadowing his face. Hanging from his shoulders is a long black Haori with blood red kanji for 'Shini (Death)' on the back. Strapped across his back is his Odachi. on hiws left hip his Wakizashi and on his right hip his katana. Chest: - Spoiler:
Right Arm: - Spoiler:
Left hand: - Spoiler:
Shoulder Blades: - Spoiler:
Back: - Spoiler:
Back of neck - - Spoiler:
Personality: Makai Kasai is a very calm and collected individual. Makai's face is always in a neutral position making it impossible to read his movements. He speaks in a monotone voice preferring not to show any sort of emotion. He enjoys being by himself and dislikes noise. makai can switch from his cold nature to a violent one when he is disturbed by loud noise. He despises crowds and prefers to be by himself. Makai is cold to everyone he meets treating them as if there beneath him and shows no respect to those he deems weak. He enjoys calling owards cowards, weaklings and trash. He will not hesitate to kill anyone that he deems to be weak even his own comrades. He cares only about the mission and nothing of his own comrades and will kill them if they get in his way. He enjoys twisting with peoples minds and toying with them with Genjutsu. Even though he appears to be a cold blooded heartless killer to all to children he is gentle and kind. He often hides his gentle nature from those around him but around children he can not help himself and will go out of his way to help them even to play with them having what would be a cold outer exterior yet warm older brotherly figure on the inside. Those that call him on his gentle nature he threatens to kill if they ever tell a soul of his actions. He is seen as an older brother to most of the orphans in the village. Likes & Dislikes: Likes
- Genjutsu
- Kenjutsu
- Swords
- Reading
- Sleeping
- Killing
- Peace and Quiet
- Nature
- Women
Dislikes
- Weaklings
- Cowards
- Loud People
- Crowds
- Idiot's
- Civilians
- Rapists
- Kids
Catch Phrase: "Pathetic weakling", "Nothing but Trash", "I'll Kill You Trash", "Shini (Die)"
Clan Name: Kasai Kekkei Genkai:- Spoiler:
- Spoiler:
The Gengan or the Illusion eye is the Doujutsu of the Kasai Clan. The Gengan is broken into six stages. The more tomoes the eye holds the stronger it is. Each stage is reprented by a different tomoe inside the Gengan. A fully matured Gengan contains Six Tomoes. The Gengan allows the user to cast Genjutsu from their eyes by taking one glance into the opponents eye. They are only able to cast Genjutsu depending on their Level. Each stage of the Gengan allows the user to detect genjutsu above the user's rank. The further the Gengan is in its stages the higher level the Genjutsu it can detect.
Stages
Level 1: The first level when the Gengan is activated takes the form of a single dark blue tomoe around the iris. The first level of the Gengan allows the user to see through E and D level Genjutsu and is capable of casting back a genjutsu that has been used on them up to D level.
Level 2: The second stage of the Gengan takes the form of a second dark blue tomoe to appear around the iris. The second level allows for the user to see through up to C level Genjutsu and is capable of casting back a genjutsu that has been used on them up to C level. The second stage increases the users IQ by 50 to make them smarter.
Level 3: The third stage of the Gengan takes the form of a third tomoe around the iris. The third stage of the Gengan increases one's perception of their surroundings allowing them to be more aware. The third stage allows for the user to see through B level Genjutsu and is capable of casting genjutsu back onto the caster up to B level. The third stage further increases the users BRain Capacity by upping their IQ by another 50. The third stage enables one to see high speed movements above their rank allowing a Genin to see up to Chunin level speeds or a Jounin to see close to Anbu level speeds.
Level 4: The fourth stage of the Gengan takes the form of a fourth tomoe around the iris. The fourth stage of the Gengan allows the user to see through Genjutsu up to A rank. The fourth stage allows the user to cast back a genjutsu casted upon them back onto the caster up to A level. The fourth stage further increases the users BRain Capacity by upping their IQ by another 50. The fourth stage allows the user's brain to memorise any genjutsu they have seen allowing them to recall that Genjutsu from their memory and learn it they are able to copy genjutsu up to the A rank. The Fourth stage enables one to see high speed movements two ranks above their own, genin can see low Jounin and Jounin up to Sannin levels.
Level 5: The fifth stage of the Gengan takes the form of a fifth tomoe around the iris. The fifth stage of the Gengan allows the user to cast back a single Genjutsu of the S rank (Once per Topic). The fifth stage raises the user's awareness allowing them to follow high moving objects above there own by three ranks.
Level 6: The sixth and final stage takes the form of a sixth tomoe where a single ring connects the tomoes together. The tomoes are then connected by a black string connected to the iris. The sixth stage allows one to see through S level Genjutsu and turn them back onto the caster. THe eye enables one to memorise S level Genjutsu and use them for later use once learned. The sixth stage of the Gengan the mastery of it allows for the user to see up to three ranks above their own, Chunin can detect Sannin level speeds, Jounin kage level ect. (Only achievable for Chunin+)
However mastery of the Gengan comes at a price, The eyes come with a curse inflicting their user with the illness Tuberculosis. Even if the disease is removed use of the eyes inflicts the user with the disease once more. THe more the eyes are used the quicker the disease spreads.
(All memorised techniques require training before they can be used)
Clan Symbol: - Spoiler:
Clan Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Name: Kekkai Genkai no Ijou: Gengan: Fuuin (Bloodline Limit Transfer: Illlusion Eye: Seal)
Rank: S
Range: Close (f5 metres)
Type: Fuuinjutsu Kinjutsu
Element: Doesn't use one
Handsigns: Rat, Boar, Horse, Snake, Monkey, Rat - place hands onto scroll and channel chakra through it.
Description:
The Kekkai Genkai no Ijou: Gengan: Fuuin is an S level Fuuinjutsu developed by he original kasai the first to awaken the Gengan. The original Kasai a master of Fuuinjutsu created a series of seals writing them down into a scroll that when used allowed for a Kasai member to transplant one of there Gengan into another's eye upon death and use the scroll to bind the DNA of the eye with the one who it was transplanted into. THis effectively made the Gengan there own allowing them to active and deactive it and pass it onto there children who would awaken it in both eyes allowing the Gengan to live on should it die out. The scroll containing the seal is light blue. The seals when activated will spread from the scroll forming a twenty foot wide and twenty foot long black circle. Inside the circle is a nine pointed star with three intercesting ellipses within the middle of the star.
Clan History: (ot much is known about the Gengan eye. All that has been recorded is that it appeared two hundred years ago in Makai's family. The Gengan eye as it was called or the eye of Illusion most of Makai's family never made it past the first stage. it had been listed as a bloodline in Sunagakure but since not much was known about it and none of the Kasai were ever able to master the bloodline it was forgotten about and the Gengan vanished from the Kasai for thirty five years. Upon the day of Makai's birth his Gengan eye activated within his eyes to the second stage. Slowly over the years as Makai joined SUna's rank as a Shinobi his Gengan eye grew stronger every day by the time of being a Chunin his eye had already evolved to the final stage as he mastered the eye that none of his ancestors could before him. With his eye he created the Kasai clan within Sunagakure as its founder.
Country: Sunagakure Village Rank: Jounin Skill Rank: A
Skill Specialty: Main: Genjutsu Sub: Kenjutsu Elemental Affinity:Main: Fuuton Sub: Katon Special Characteristics: 1) Genjutsu mastery - Makai is known as a genuis in the art of Genjutsu that he has the ability to perform that with a blink of an eye not even needing the full handseals to perform them just the last one. 2) High Speed - As a Kenjutsu user Makai has built up his body for high speed battle deeming it as a must. His speed is above that of the average Jounin around that of a High Kage Level Shinobi allowing him to be able to move swiftly in close range combat. 3) Body - Due to his illness five years ago makai's strength, stamina and speed decreased rapidly to the Genin level. For five years Makai forced his body back to its original state before being hit with his illness. 4) Chakra Control - Being a Master of Genjutsu Makai has perfect control over his chakra allowing him to use less chakra per technique eg for an A level Technique he would use the amount required for a B level technique but still be as powerful as an A level Jutsu. 5) Chakra pathways - When Makai was born his father used a Fuuinjutsu upon him that split his chakra coils in two giving him twice the normal amount of chakra he would normally have. Upon using his primary reserve of chakra the secondary reserve will immediately begin to refill the primary reserve. 6) Ninjutsu - Even though Makai specialises in the art of Genjutsu he has taken the time to study the art of Ninjutsu as to not leave himself defenceless if the situation calls for it. Only ever taking the time to learn eleven Ninjutsu. (Note Makai will not be learning any More Ninjutsu only for the occassion D or C level Technique the rest will be Genjutsu) 7) Taijutsu - As a Genjutsu user Makai has noticed his greatest weakness would be taijutsu. To avoid this Makai trained studying to learn enough Taijutsu to allow him to survive in hand to hand combat if needed.  Kenjutsu Mastery - Besides Genjutsu Makai studied the art of Kenjutsu extensively mastering the art of the sword. makai is proficient in Kenjutsu able to wield an odachi, katana and Wakizashi without mistake. Flaws/Weaknesses:Ninjutsu Consumption: As Makai hasn't taken the time to learn to master the art of Ninjutsu he expands more chakra then needed when performing a simple Ninjutsu. EG for example with water if a normal shinobi wasted 1 litre of water Makai would waste 1.5 litres Extended Period of Fighting - Because of his Illness Makai is only able to fight with Taijutsu for an extended period of time. Once he reaches his limit he will quickly become fatigued, his chest will start to hurt as he stumbles over coughing violently bringing up blood and mucus. This is also with his Kenjutsu he is only aqble to use his fighting styles in sword or hand to hand combat for so long before his disease acts up on him. Blood Lust - Makai has an unnaturally high blood lust that will boil within him at the smallest sign of blood turning him into a sadistic crazed killer. He will cut down anything and anyone that stands in his path at this stage even his own comrades if they get in his way. Gengan: Makai's Doujuts the Gengan having being fully mastered he is only able to use the eye for so long before his illness begins to act up. The longer he uses it the more his life span rapidly drops being him every closer to his timely demise, Tuberculosis - Makai has aquired Tuberculosis over his years becoming deathly ill forcing himself to move and live a Shinobi everyday clutching himself to life living just off the reaches of death. Makai has contracted Tuberculosis within his lungs and it is currently in its final stages giving him not long to live at least another five years before he dies. Symptoms The primary stage of TB usually doesn't cause symptoms. When symptoms of pulmonary TB occur, they may include: •Cough (usually cough up mucus) •Coughing up blood •Excessive sweating, especially at night •Fatigue •Fever •Unintentional weight loss Other symptoms that may occur with this disease: •Breathing difficulty •Chest pain •Wheezing
Basic gear
- Kunai
- Shuriken
- Ninja Wire
- Makibishi spikes
- Smoke bombs
- Flash Bombs
- Exploding Tags
- Senbon
- Soldier Pills
- Blood Pills
- Sealing Scrolls
- Holster (For Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon)
- Item Pouches
Name: Magen (Demonic Illusion) Appearance: - Spoiler:
Rank: S Special Abilities: The Magen is an amplifier of Genjutsu and the Gengan. As an Amplifier it increases the Gengan's basic abilities making them stronger. The Magen boosts the power of genjutsu casted making them far stronger and boosting there rank making a C level Genjutsu equal in terms of a B level Genjutsu amking them harder to break. Origin: The Magen was an odachi passed down through the Kasai family given to the eldest male of the family every generation. It is said the sword was forged from the blood of the first Kasai along with his Gengan to form the Magen the Demonic Illusion blade. The sword has consumed all before it with blood lust leading them out onto the battle field and to their death. Only those with a fully matured Gengan is said to be able to control the blade and use it to its full potential. Name: Katana Appearance: - Spoiler:
Rank: A Special Abilities:The blade of this katana was forged from chakra conducting metal allowing for Makai to generate his chakra through the blade. he is able to cast genjutsu's from his katana as part of his kengenjutsu sword style Origin: Makai had the katana forged for him in suna Name: Wakizashi Appearance: - Spoiler:
Rank: A Special Abilities: The blade of this Wakizashi was forged from chakra conducting metal allowing for Makai to generate his chakra through the blade. he is able to cast genjutsu's from his wakizashi as part of his kengenjutsu sword style Origin: Makai had the Wakizashi forged in Suna. Name: Kimono like top Appearance: Makai's shirt takes the form of a long sleeved black Kimono like top. The sleeves are longer than his hands reaching ten centimetres from his fingers allowing them to hang down. The insides of his sleeves at the ends of his fingers are coated with metal allowing him to use his metal coated sleeve ends to deflect incoming weaponry. Rank: B Special Abilities: Metal coated sleeves for weapon deflecting Origin: Makai had the top made for him upon his rank of making chunin. Name: Medicine Appearance: - Spoiler:
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Special Abilities: Makai's medicine for calming down his TB when required. Origin: Given to him by the Medics of Sunagakure
History: - Early Life:
Makai was born into the Kasai family, upon his birth he had actived his clans Gengan or Illusion eye but unlike the rest he held two tomoes in each eye. His father upon this discovery used a fuuinjutsu on his son that split his chakra coils in two effectively increasing his chakra reserves doubling them giving him a primary and secondary source of chakra. Once his primary reserve ran out his secondary reserve would fill his primary back up. From his early years Makai was raised the Kasai way training from the moment he could walk being forced to train under heavy pressure. Every since he was young Makai rarely ever spoke to his family always being silent studying everything they did making sure to take a note of it.
By the time he was five years of age Makai had unlocked the third stage of his Gengan already surpassing most of his clansmen. Makai had the art of Gejutsu drilled into his brain forced to study the art of illusions. At the age of five makai was already reading at an Adult level and was as fast as most Genin with chakra reserves to rival a low CHunin level Shinobi. At the age of seven makai entered into the Sunagakure ninja academy along side many others his own age. Unlike the others Makai ahd a good number of low level Genjutsu under his belt having designed a few as well. While in the academy Makai took up the art of kenjutsu learning to use a sword. By the age of nine years of age most of Makai's clan had died out being extinct leaving him as the last remaining Kasai and the last user of the Gengan.
When Makai was ten he had started to develop a style of Kenjutsu that mixed with genjutsu for Kengenjutsu the first of its kind Illusion based sword techniques. Makai tried and studied hard to create his style graduating at the top of his class during that year and being placed onto a genin team. Upon his graduation Makai gained the Magen the Demonic Illusion blade an Odachi that was passed down through his family.
- genin years:
During his Genin days Makai spent most of his time avoiding his team rarely speaking with them same with his sensei. THe only time Makai ever interacted with his team was during team training exercises or on Missions if needed. While on Missions he would leave his fellow Genin be leaving them to fend for themselves while he went off to do his own thing believing the mission was more important than his own team. Makai had a 100% mission completion rate. Makai contineud to grow further and further apart from his team deeming them as only items that would help him grow stronger.
By the age of eleven makai had created the first dance of his Kengenjutsu the Meimu-Kami no Ken: Ichiban no Mai: Kage Sui-pu (Sword of the Illusion God: First Dance: Shadow Sweep) along with creating numerous Genjutsu of his own design. By the age of Eleven his team had found of there elements Makai being aligned to the elements of Wind and Fire, his first team-mate earth the other water his sensie being an Earth and Water Type. Makai's sensei not being alligned to the same elements handed him over to another Jounin to help him learn to use his two elements.
By the time of the Chunin exams Makai was twelve years old and had designed his own taijutsu style and learnt to wield both his Wind and Fire element chakra. He took the exams with his fellow genin both half way through there element nature manipulation chakra. During the exams Makai was able to cast a genjutsu over the chunin proctors and the other genin to steal answers for the first test without being caught. During the second stage they were sent into a cave where they would be forced to take the head-bands of another team so they would have six theres and the teams they stole before they could pass the exam.
During the final exam a tournament style battle. Makai faced off against his own team-mates but crushed them with his genjutsu defeating them in a most humilating manner. He showed the skill and intellect of a chunin allowing him to gain a promotion and leave his squad.
- Chunin Arc:
Makai spent the first six years of his life as a chunin mostly training his mind body and soul. He spent the those five years concentrating on his chakra control to gain complete mastery over his chakra completing tree climbing, water walking, waterfall walking, air gliding, water skating, kunai balancing, leaf balancing and many other chakra control exercises. Makai even spent the time trying to increase the power of his Gengan gaining two more tomoes in both eyes for the fifth stage. Makai even spent the time creating two more techniques for his style of fighting he called Meimu-Kami no Ken the Sword of the Illusion God a style of sword fighting combined with Illusion techniques to create Kengenjutsu. Out of all of the abilities Makai trained in, he, advanced most in Genjutsu and Kenjutsu creating multiple Genjutsu and learning to use a sword masterfully.
At the age of eighteen Makai went back to taking mission after mission. He would come back to the village then leave on another mission never taking anything less than a B or A level Mission. He became known as Meimu-Kami no Makai or Makai the God of Illusions for his mastery of Genjutsu and his Gengan as such as he was labelled as a B level Shinobi. By the age of twenty-three Makai had performed more Missions than most seasoned Jounin. He had gained a reputation within his village as a cold hearted killer and one to be feared as he always came back from a mission covered with blood.
At the age of twenty-five Makai went for the Jounin exams being eligible. Makai’s test was to go up against a seasoned Jounin to see how his abilities fared. Unknown to anyone else Makai had reached the final stage of his Gengan reaching the sixth tomoe. Makai utterly thrashed his opponent with his Kengenjutsu, Genjutsu and Gengan casting Genjutsu by just blinking. He had mastered his abilities and used them to decimate his opponent completely thrashing him putting him in his place. Makai was promoted to the rank of Jounin after his display of Genjutsu.
- Jounin arc:
Makai spent the time as a Jounin doing Missions on and off taking the time to learn Taijutsu developing his own style of Taijutsu using Fuuton nature chakra. Makai even perfected his Meimu-Kami no Ken with a total of five dances to his style of Kengenjutsu. Makai spent the time to learn a single medical technique encase he ever needed it. As a Jounin Makai only ever took the most dangerous of A and S level Missions becoming known as a feared A level ninja. Makai even took the time to learn different Ninjutsu for his elements encase he would ever need them if he was unable to use his Genjutsu. At this time he had his Magen the Odachi, a Katana and a Wakizashi on his body able to wield each of them with equal skill.
However at the age of thirty Makai was struck down with a disease. Makai had been struck down with Tuberculosis originating from his Gengan. It would seem his eyes came with a curse upon mastery of the sixth level and over use of it. Makai spent a full three months in the hospital his muscles deteriorating as his speed, strength and stamina were reduced to the level of a new Genin. Upon his release he was told if he retired as a Shinobi he would live for another twenty years but Makai ignored them and spent the next two years training to get his body back to its original state. No matter how many times he was told to quit he continued his job as a Shinobi as it was the only thing he knew.
By the age of thirty-five his disease had reached its final stages giving him only another five years to live. Because of his disease he softened slightly getting to know the younger generation becoming sort of an older brother to the children and orphans in the village. Even with his gentle interior he had a cold harder exterior as he continued his missions always coming back drenched in blood.
RP Sample: - Spoiler:
Makai stood in the fields looking around with a bored expression on his features. His cold eyes scanned the area as his pitch black hair fluttered into the air as it reached down around his mid back held up in a ponytail. A large scythe attached to his back. A chain seemed to be slipped under his shirt and was wrapped around his chest. He slowly reached up grabbing the massive scythe with ease giving a blank expression as he stared at those that stood before him. Ten Kiri Anbu stood across from him each drawing there swords. The Kasai drew his scythe his chain flying up into the air and spiralling around his arm while the rest struck the ground.
Makai slowly slipped into a stance holding his scythe with his right hand. His left hand raised towards his enemy wind chakra spiralling around it. Makai erupted into black rose petals as he casted his illusion.T he petals spiralled around the anbu. Makai appeared in front of them deliverig a powerful wind chakra enhanced hit to his opponents chest right over there heart. BLood splattered everywhere as a blade made of wind was piercing through there body. The tips of Makai's fingers in there chest as the blade of wind went right through there heart.
Makai swung his massive scythe slicing the Anbu in half. Makai threw his scythe into the air and grabbed it by the chain. he started to spin it, "COme on trash come and die at my hands. Pathetic Weaklings!" he pulled five senbon from his holster and channeled wind chakra into them. he tossed them at five Anbu. The anbu leapt out of the way but one got hit the senbon going right through his head killing them. Makai laughed, 'This is pathetic come on your Anbu!"
Makai vanished into the shadows. Pythons shot from the shadows flying to the anbu. The anbu swung there swords cutting the snakes in half. One shot forward grabbing an anbu with a raven mask. it dug its fangs into his neck. The Anbu screamed as the snake vanished revealing a kunai. he fell over dead. Makai's scythe flew through the air slicing another Anbu's head off leading six left. Makai stayed hidden in a genjutsu making them continue to guess where he was.
Five Kage bunshins formed around him. They spread off hunting the Anbu from the shadows. Screams filled the air as Makai and his clones struck. Their giant scythes tearing into the anbu completely decimating them. There bodies were shredded as the scythes ran right through them spraying blood everywhere. makai flicked the blood off his scythe and threw it onto his back. His clones got to work cleaning the mess up and placing the bodies in boxes and shipping them off to kiri with a message attached "Like i said nothing but weaklings. Next time send someone that at least proves a challenge'
Makai turned and started to walk off. His back to his clones as they took the boxes and left for Kiri to leave them at the front gate. Makai gave a cruel laugh. he jumped to a branch and leapt away heading towards the boarder to the land of wind heading towards Suna. maybe there he'd have a better challenge someone that actually stands a chance against him the rest were all just trash.
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| | | | Makai Kasai
Posts : 8
Join date : 2011-07-06
| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:25 am | |
| Basic Academy Techniques - Spoiler:
Was told they weren't included into Jutsu count
Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Range: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Dog → Boar → Ram
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to transform either themselves or another object into the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konohagakure Ninja Academy, and most shinobi know this jutsu. The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts mental strain on an inexperienced ninja. Thus the best way to determine if it is indeed a transformation is to cause this strain upon the user; though this is of course not always successful.[2]
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Escape)
Rank: E
Range: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns:
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up. How this is done is unknown.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Ninjutsu/Bunshinjutsu
Element: -
Handsigns:Ram → Snake → Tiger
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. These illusions however have been shown to be easily distinguishable by persons with dōjutsu. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones do not have shadows and will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (i.e. won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak Invisibility)
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Handsigns: -
Description:This technique allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible
Name: Kawarimi
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns:Ram → Boar → Ox → Dog → Snake
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Handsigns: Ram
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination
Name: Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: -
Handsigns: -
Description:
This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fūinjutsu. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use
 Combat Style - Spoiler:
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Name: Meimu-Kami no Ken (Sword of the Illusion God)
Rank: S Rank style
Range: Depending on Technique
Type: Kengenjutsu (Sword Illusion Technique)
Element: Style doesn't use one
Handsigns: Techniques require none
Description:
The Meimu-Kami no Ken is a style of Kenjutsu having been created by Makai Kasai. The Meimu-Kami no Ken is a style of sword play that combines the sword with Genjutsu the illusion art. Makai has designed the style for the ue of a single or even multiple swords. The combination of Genjutsu and Kenjutsu designed by makai the entire purpose of this style is to deliver swift killing blows by destracting the enemy with Genjutsu combined with the Technique used.
Name: Buraddiyashi (Bloody Palm)
Rank: A - for deadliness
Range: 10 metres+
Type: [Taijutsu
Element: Fuuton
Handsigns:None
Description: A style of Taijutsu that uses wind chakra for different types of blows. This style is a style of combat that when used will cause fast and painful blows to the opponent aiming at there vital points, pressure points and kill points on there body. Kill points being certain areas on the body that can be strained and when struck properly will cause severe pain to the enemy. Each time the user strikes they’ll coat there fists or body part in wind chakra and when they strike the wind will act as blades to cut into the enemy’s body. Generally with each move blood will fly into the air as such the bloody palm. The user is able to generate twister’s large gusts of winds to even launching numerous wind blades for this style. If it can be done with wind it can be performed.
- Genjutsu:
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Name: Kokuangyo no Jutsu (Bringer-of-Darkness Technique)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10metres
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger
Description: This technique exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, effectively blinding the opponent. No matter how skilled an opponent may be, they are forced to wait helpless in this world of darkness, as this technique allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses. In essence, the opponent can hear, feel, and smell out the user of the technique and break its effects by landing one hit.
Name: Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: C
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger
Description: This technique changes the appearance of a nearby object or area in order to disorient the opponent.
Name: Magen: Nijū Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: B
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Handsigns: Ram
Description: This technique places another illusion within another illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realise that a second is in place.
Name: Magen: Jigoku Kōka no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique)
Rank: C
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Boar → Dog → Semi Bird → Monkey → Ram
Description:This jutsu causes the illusion of a tremendous ball of fire falling from the sky into a designated area.
Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Rank: D
Range: 0-5m
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Snake → Rat
Description:
This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. If the mental image is a gruesome one, the shock will be accordingly great.
Name: Jigyaku no Jutsu (Time Reversal Technique)
Rank: A
Range: Close range
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Dog → Snake → Ox → Bird → Tiger
Description: This technique puts the target in a state of reverse hypnosis, allowing them to remember details that they otherwise would not. The target will comply with interrogation, but seems to retain his or her personality while under hypnosis
Name: Nehan Shōja no Jutsu (Temple of Nirvana Technique)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger
Description: This jutsu causes everyone within a specific area to fall into a deep sleep. From the target's point of view, it seems as if feathers are falling from the sky, which serves as a distraction to allow the jutsu to take effect. The downside, however, is that any experienced ninja have more than enough time to dispel it.
Name: Kori Shinchū no Jutsu (Sly mind Affect)
Rank: C
Range: 5-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Rat
Description: This technique causes the enemy to walk around in circles for hours by making it seem as if they're walking straight to their desired destination. The enemy eventually becomes exhausted after travelling the same path over and over.
Name: Mental Barricades
Rank: A
Range:-
Type: Genjutsu
Element: -
Handsigns: None
Description: The user can use this technique to place mental blocks in the target's mind that contains valuable information in case the one with the information is captured and interrogated. The barricades look like stylized traditional Japanese sliding doors.
- Taijutsu:
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Name: Gensu no Sochi (Illusionary Step)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Rat
Description: The Illusionary Step is a move created by makai. he kicks off with his right leg and sends himself flying towards his target. The point of this technique is to maximum Makai's speed and further increase it. The move requires most of the weight of the human body to be placed on the legs so when the user kicks off they are able to increase their speed rapidly thanks to the extra force used in the push offs with each move as they run at there opponent. They can slow down by removing the weight from there legs by slowly standing up form a crouching position. They can rapidly accelerate by applying chakra into there feet and pushing off with the chakra and releasing it when they push off to act as a forward thrust. Makai can send his chakra to the sides of his feet to help him turn when using this move. The speed he moves at make sit seem like he appears everywhere he moves making multiple 'illusions' of himself. If he uses to much chakra he will over shoot his target and injure himself from the crash. if he shoots to much chakra out the sides of his feet it will cause him to fall. He can only use this 20 times in a row before having to wait 5 posts.
- Custom Genjutsu:
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Name: Kuro Sakura no Jutsu (Black Cherry Blossom Technique)
Rank: C
Range: 10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Ram
Description: when Makai uses this technique he casts a genjutsu over his opponent so that when he is struck it makes it seem like he has turned into thousands of black cherry blossoms. He is also able to use this technique to make himself dissolve into thousands of black cherry blossoms to spiral around his opponent.
Name: Iryūjonkurōn (illusion Clones)
Rank: C
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Handsigns: Half Ram
Description: When casted this illusion will create multiple 'clones' of the caster in the form of an illusion. Everything these illusions do is at the exact same time. They will talk together and move together. When they are attacked the attack will go right through them yet the illusion will stay unharmed. Similar to the clone technique just more advanced. But once discovered as a genjutsu they can easily be broken by the simple release command.
Name: Kuro Sakura: hitoame (Black Cherry Blossoms: Shower)
Rank: C
Range:
Type:
Element:
Handsigns:
Description: Once the black Cherry Blossom Illusion has been casted as the caster bursts into petals the petals will rapidly multiple. The mass of black cherry petals will spiral around the enemy and wash over them consuming them in petals. In the storm of petals the caster will appear to kill them.
Name: Budou no ki no hayashi (Forestry of Vines)
Rank: C
Range: 0-5m
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Snake-Tiger
Description: When this genjutsu is casted numerous vines will shoot up from the ground intended to wrap around the enemy to bind them. Vines will continue to grow from the ground grabbing what they can and in turn creating a large forest of vines.
Name: Jigoku:Kōjun kaminari (Demonic Illusion: Descending Lightning)
Rank: C
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Dragon - Tiger - Rat
Description: This jutsu causes the illusion of a large bolt of lightning falling from the sky into a designated area. Anyone in the area should instinctively flee
Name: Jigoku: Jishin (demonic Illusion: Earthquake)
Rank: C
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Dragon - Tiger - Snake
Description: This causes the illusion that in a designated area the earth begins to shake as an earthquake hits the area. Anyone in the area should instinctively flee
Name: Kemuri kumo (Smoke Cloud)
Rank: B
Range: 0-5m
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: half Dragon
Description: This Kemuri kumo is a scent based Genjutsu created by Makai. he will pull out a cigarette and light it out. he will breath smoke in before breathing it out towards his opponents. THe smoke will be infused with chakra so once they smell it the genjutsu will begin. The smoke will rapidly expand spiralling around them to blanket them in smoke to suffocate them
Name: Kuro Sakura: Hana (Black Cherry Blossoms: Flower)
Rank: B
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Handsigns: Dog - Monkey - Rat
Description: After the black Cherry Blossom illusion a stem will grow up from the ground wrapping around any intend targets. The stem will open up revealing it to be a giant black cherry blossom . The caster will grow out of the flower to decapitate anyone caught inside.
Name: Andeddo no kōru (Call of the Undead)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Handsigns: Dragon - Boar - Rat - Ram - Tiger- Ram - Rat - Bird - Ram
Description: When this illusion is casted the Target(s) will find that they have been transported into a large graveyard. Itll be pitch black and a thick errie mist will consume the area. The ground will shake as up from the graves the undead will come up from. The ZOmbies will head to those captured inside to devour them
Name: Kurai shiro (Dark Castle)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger- Boar - Ram - Monkey - Rat
Description: When this illusion is casted the enemy will find themselves inside of a large pitch black castle. A black mist will surround the castle and enter inside of it. They will find themselves walking through a maze of corridors leading them to the centre of the castle. Once at the centre they'll find themselves under attack by large walking suits of armour.
Name: Chēn maisō (Chain Burial)
Rank: C
Range: 0-5m
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Bird
Description: The Chēn maisō is a genjutsu created by makai. When makai uses this move chains will shoot up from the ground to grab his opponent(s). The chains will wrap around them and slowly drag them under the ground and make them think there suffocating while being underground till they either fall unconscious for die from there brain believing them to be getting a lack of oxygen.
Name: Dama no Niihou (Two Sides of a Coin)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger - Ram
Description: The Dama no Niihou is a genjutsu designed by Makai. He will toss a coin and depending on the outcome of tails or heads will depend on the genjutsu. If it is Heads the person trapped within the genjutsu will find themselves chained to a cross with nails within their hands being crucified before being burnt alive by flames. The genjutsu affects the brain to make those trapped inside think its even more so real by tricking the brain into thinking the skin is getting hotter. If the coin comes up Tails the person the technique is used on will find themself in a meadow with a young woman of there dreams standing before them or someone within there village or someone from there past. The genjutsu also can make appear someone they love. If it is a female a young male will appear. The genjutsu then makes the person trapped within are pleasured by the person that appeared experience X rated Dreams. With this destraction makai is easily able to kill or capture the person trapped inside his genjutsu.
Name: Mizu oboreru (Water Drowning)
Rank: B
Range: 0-5m
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger - snake - dragon
Description: The Mizu oboreru is a simply technique that Makai uses. When he uses it his opponent(s) will find themselves beneath the water there feet chained to the bottom and unable to rise to the surface. Since this illusion plays tricks on them it makes them believe they are submerged head to toe in water as such there body doesn't get the oxygen it needs and they started to drown. Makai can use the illusion and pull there head up above the surface. he uses this for interogation.
Name: Enmaku (Smoke Screen)
Rank: D
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Ram
Description: Makai for this illusion breaths in and seems to breath out a large thick smoke. The smoke illusion is used to consum,e him and the area to hide him and allow him to attack his enemies from inside the illusion of smoke
Name: Magen: Tenbatsu e jigoku (Demonic Illusion: Damnation into Hell)
Rank: S
Range: 10m+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger, Dragon, Bird, ox, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Bird, Dragon, Ram, Rat, Ram, Ox, Dog, Dragon, Horse, Rabbit, Horse, Dragon, Bird, Rabbit, Dog, Tiger, Monkey, Snake, Rat, Snake, Ram
Description: damnation into Hell is an S class Genjutsu created by Makai Kasai. Makai will cast this over his opponents by first using hand seals pretending to cast a ninjutsu onto his enemy by calling out Ninpo: Tenbatsu e Jigoku. When he locks eyes with his enemy he will perform an entire different hand seal and call out the true name of the genjutsu casting it over his enemies. Once caught inside his enemy will find themselves standing in a large underground cavern with a river of lava beside them. Appearing behind them will be the appearance of the Shinigami itself. They will find themselves being tied down to a stone slab and lava being poured onto them scolding them. There injuries healing instantly only for it to happen over and over until they break it. This gives makai the chance to kill them
- Meimu-Kami no Ken:
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Name: Meimu-Kami no Ken: Ichiban no Mai: Kage Sui-pu (Sword of the Illusion God: First Dance: Shadow Sweep)
Rank: B
Range: Sword- Close, Genjutsu 10M+
Type: Kengenjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: None
Description:
The Meimu-Kami no Ken: Ichiban no Mai: Kage Sui-pu is the first technique of the Meimu-Kami no ken. Makai will channel his chakra through his Magen and cast a genjutsu on his opponents. It will seem thatd arkness has spread from his sword encasing the surrounding area completely blinding them as they are engulfed by a black void. After casting the Genjutsu Makai will move in and going with a long swing of his sword to cut his targets head from their shoulders decapitating them. The last thing they see is a shadow moving in before there death.
Name: Meimu-Kami no Ken: Niban no Mai: Konmei (Sword of the Illusion God: Second Dance: Confusion)
Rank: B
Range: Sword Close, Genjutsu 10m+
Type: Kengenjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: None
Description: Meimu-Kami no Ken: Niban no Mai: Konmei is the second dance of the Meimu-kami no Ken. Makai will channel chakra through his sword casting a genjuts on his target. As he swings his sword it will appear as if multiple arms have sprouting from his shoulder with multiple swords. The swords will seem to grow in number as he swings his blade before charging in. The genjutsu is designed to make sure that the blade can not be seen allowing Makai to quickly kill his target through the confusion of his genjutsu 'creating' multiple swords and arms.
Name:Meimu-Kami no Ken: Sanban no Mai: Chacha (Sword of the Illusion God: Third Dance: Disruption)
Rank: A
Range: 10m+
Type: Kengenjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: None
Description: The Meimu-Kami no Ken: Sanban no Mai: Chacha is the third technique of the Meimu-Kami no Ken. Makai will use his chakra to encase his opponent in a genjutsu that disrupts all five of their senses their senses of smell, touch, sight, hearing and taste. With the senses being disrupted Makai will use this to his advantage to get within range to deliver the killing blow with his sword. The genjutsu works best aorund disrupting their sense of reaction time and depth perseption even making it seem objects are further away when there not making it harder for the opponent to dodge the killing blow.
Name: Meimu-Kami no Ken: Yonban no Mai: Jigoku Tamago (Sword of the Illusion God: Fourth Dance: Hell Spawn)
Rank: B
Range: 10m+
Type: Kengenjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: None
Description: Meimu-Kami no Ken: Yonban no Mai: Jigoku Tamago is a technique where Makai channels his chakra through his sword and swing its in a wide arc. From his sword multiple demonic looking insects will erupt from the blade up to fifty of them. As the insects fly through the air Makaiwill seem to vanish using the illusion to hide himself. The insects when they connect with their target will seem to burrow into their flesh eating their insides when in reality makai has delivered fast multiple sword jabs to his target.
Name: Meimu-Kami no Ken: Kouki no Mai: Shinigami (Sword of the Illusion God: Final Dance: God of Death)
Rank: S
Range: 10m+
Type: Kengenjutsu
Element: Futon
Handsigns: none
Description: This is the final technique of the Meimu-Kami no Ken. using this techbnique Makai will cast a genjutsu over a wide terrain causing a void of darkness to spread. Surrounding him a dark purple mist will leak from his body taking upon the demonic form of the shinigami. In this illusion his sword will be encased by wind nature chakra increase its range and sharpness. With every action makai performs the image of the Shinigami performs. The form of the Shinigami is used to install fear upon the enemy mixed with makai's killer intent. When the target is struck before their eyes the illusion makes it seem as if the shinigami is ripping their soul from there body before delivering the final blow. Using this on multple enemies by killing the first and appearing to have his soul ripped out is a tactic for Makai to instgal fear on the rest of his targets and a sense of hopelessness thus with the intent of making them give their lives up or making them beg for mercy.
- Ninjutsu:
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Name: Meisaigakure no Jutsu (Hidding with Camouflage)
Rank: A
Range: 0m
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Handsigns: Tiger
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. However, the usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills.
Name:Shinkūken (Vacuum Sword)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m+
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Futon
Handsigns: None
Description: The user swings their blade and a gust of wind is released in the arc that it was swung in. The technique is strong enough to stop projectiles that are thrown at the user.
Name: Fūton: Shinkūha (Wind Release: Vacuum Wave)
Rank: A
Range: 0-10m
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Handsigns:Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog or Rat → Rabbit → Dog
Description: The user takes a deep breath and spins while exhaling, compressing the released air into a solitary blade of wind that covers a substantial area around the user, due to their circular motion. The resulting sharpened blast is large enough to slice through multiple targets located a significant distance from the user, causing grievous injuries amongst those hit, which may even prove fatal.
Name: Fūton: Atsugai (Wind Release Pressure Damage)
Rank: B
Range: All Ranges
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Handsigns: Ram
Description: A powerful wind technique which is released by Kakuzu's wind-element mask. A tornado-like mass is compressed until it has a very high density and is then released. The wind pressure is raised to its highest limit, and once the technique hits the target, the resulting blast sweeps everyone off their feet.
If the technique is used by someone who has mastered wind nature transformation, the blast can hit a vast range, inflicting massive damage on both the target and their surroundings.
Name:Fūton: Daitoppa (Wind Release: Great Breakthrough)
Rank: C
Range: 5m
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Handsigns: Tiger → Ox → Dog → Rabbit → Snake
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Name: Fūton: Kamikaze (Wind Release: Divine Wind)
Rank: B
Range: 0-10metres
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Handsigns: Ram
Description: The user releases a gust of wind that forms several small tornadoes. Combined with Fire Release: Running Fire that forms a circle on ground level, this creates a massive flaming hurricane.
Name: Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique)
Rank: B
Range: All
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns: Tiger
Description:
The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes.
Name: Katon: Zukokku (Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work)
Rank: B
Range: 0-10+m
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns: Rat → Dog → Tiger
Description: Kakuzu's fire-element mask fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.
Name: Katon: Hibashiri (Fire release: Running Fire)
Rank: B
Range: All ranges
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns: Tiger
Description: This jutsu will create jets of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (so far, rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno.
Name: Katon: Karyū Endan (Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Projectile)
Rank: B
Range: Short to Mid 10m
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns: Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger
Description: The user kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. Since the art of having the flames obey the user's will is outrageously difficult, its mastery is restricted to a limited number of skilful shinobi. The spat out flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.
Name: Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)
Rank: C
Range: 5m
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns:Horse → Tiger or Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. This technique apparently requires more than average chakra reserves and most genin should not be able to do this technique.
Name: Hari Jizo
Rank: B
Range: Short range
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Handsigns: Tiger → Horse → Boar → Ram → Rat → Snake
Description:
This is a technique where the user encases themselves in a countless number of sharp needles, but in truth, the spikes are the user's hair. Chakra grants the strands of hair the hardness and shape of needles, endowed with a capacity to injure and kill on par with that of metallic weapons. In addition, if activated in response to an opponent's attack, it can also be used as a counter. The hair is made hard enough that it can withstand blows from certain types of weapons such as arrows.
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| | | | Corleone
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Thu Jul 07, 2011 3:38 pm | |
| Heads up. Jounin are A not S ranked | |
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:01 pm | |
| -(Posting here on request of the App creator. Since no staff are on. He knows I'm not an actual staff but request assistance)-
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Ok, starting...
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~I'm not gonna touch the clan, since I'm not actual staff. Not sure what they expect to see and not see with clans.
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-Your left hand tattoo image doesn't show up.
-Do you have a Suna Jounin spot reserved?
-4) Chakra Control, that special characteristic may be a little to much of a chakra reduction in Jutsu. Especially with "Chakra Pathways". I'm not completely sure, but just felt like bring it up.
- DEM WEAPONS, idk lol...someone else would have to look at them. I don't wanna judge them since I'm just a basic member.
-Name: Gensu no Sochi (Illusionary Step). Idk but that may be a little to fast..the speed of which to create illusionary clones of yourself because of how fast your moving. But idk, someone else should check it out
-Name: Kuro Sakura no Jutsu (Black Cherry Blossom Technique). Should probably be C rank
-Name: Shousen no Jutsu (Mystical palm). I don't think you can have medical jutsu (Of at least this rank) Without the medical specialty. Not sure though
-Name: Fūton: Shinkūgyoku (Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere). Thats S rank
-Name: Fūton: Shinkūha (Wind Release: Vacuum Wave). Thats A rank
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| | | | kidbushido
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:18 am | |
| Your skills are Ken and Gen, why do you have A-Ranked Tai, Nin and strangely Medical Ninjutsu. Your KKG is a more OPed version of the Sharnigan. Wb though. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:47 am | |
| Well i removed the Medical technique. As for Taijutsu i can remove the illusionary steps thing. The COmbat style is only there if he needs it. And the KKG how? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:49 am | |
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| | | | Makai Kasai
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:15 am | |
| Tell me how it is first. You've just said it is and not given the reasons | |
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:41 am | |
| You can track speeds, copy genjutsu and turn them back. If you took out the copy gen and track speeds the jutsu would be perfectly fine. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:12 pm | |
| That don't make it an oped version of Sharingan. As Sharingan can do all those things plus Copy Nin and Taijutsu and predict the opponents moves. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Makai Kasai - Suna Jounin Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:51 pm | |
| Just remove the Taijutsu and you'lll be fine the clan was apporved | |
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