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Ikazuchi Kumori: Jinchuuriki of The Gobi 67901362

Name: Ikazuchi Kumori
Nickname/Alias: -
Age: 12
Gender: [M]
Looks:

Kumori Ikazuchi has blonde hair about four inches long, and has eyes colored blue. He ranges exactly five feet tall in height, and about 155 lbs. in weight. He wears a black colored shirt, with separated sleeves running down both arms, which are black colored as well. He wears a pair of black colored pants that are fastened tightly by black colored bandages to the lower portion of each leg; this helps prevent his pants from having too much slack. As for footwear, Ikazuchi wears the common pair of shoes; his are colored black, with the top part cut out revealing his toes. On the back of his waist, he wears a white colored weapon pouch, which inside of it he stores; kunai knifes shuriken, paper bombs, metallic coil, and bandages for injuries. He wears a white and blue cloak around his waist and always has a grin on his face.

Hanging on his back, with the handle baring over his left shoulder, he carries his sword. This sword was entirely customized by Ikazuchi when his father created it at a younger age. Using certain minerals, he made this weapon to where it is now practically indestructible, thus making it an ideal weapon for a Kumori. Unique to most other swords, inside of this lives the spirit of a demonic bird. While on a mission, Ikazuchi's Father fused the spirit of the bird with the sword, in order to save a small village from certain destruction because of the creature. When his father passed away he was given this has a reminder of his father. After a short time had passed, Ikazuchi discovered that because of the bird’s spirit, his spiritually possessed sword was able to return to his hand on his command. Ikazuchi later named his sword, “Onitori”, which meant, “Demon Bird.”

When in Ikazuchi taps into his inner power of his Bijuu he might regret the actions he will take in his form. Ikazuchi also known as The Host will be enveloped in a teal aura and a single chakra tail. Their speed will be increase 25%, strength increase 15%, and any and all wind element techniques can be used without hand signs. Ikazuchi will awake in his own conscience and appear before a gate and hear a dreadful voice. Ikazuchi being of a young age will cry and always faint before the voice can speak to him. Ikazuchi will awake miles away from home, and will walk back to his apartment funded by the hokage.

Personality:

As a Genin shinobi, Ikazuchi is naturally very cautious, rarely letting his guard down. Usually, he is mostly calm; however, he does become tenser depending on the difficulty of the current situation. As a shinobi, Ikazuchi is an extremely gifted genius. He is incredibly fast both, physically and mentally. Nonetheless, he is officially a Genin Metaphorically, he treats his life as a journey that unfolds by each step he takes, and where each step he walks, a new outcome for his future shall arise. Ikazuchi is smart and fast paste genin, but his power is trumped when he becomes lonely, sad, or even mad. Locked away inside the little boy is the spirit of a demon. Given to him by the Raikage for sentimental purposes, and to also protect the village. Ounce this was performed Ikazuchi was casted away by his Clan and his Village, he was sent to Konohagakure without even knowing the real truth.

Becoming stronger as a ninja is something Ikazuchi strives toward each day, and is one of his main purposes for living. When he is given time away from missions, he will spend the majority of that time training alone. When training, he trains not just to keep his abilities maintained, but he tries pushing his earthly limitations, and his body will forcibly grow in strength and stamina. Although he is an excellent ninja, his body does indeed grow weary with many hours of constant training. When his body feels utterly exhausted, he remembers the motto of his clan, "Never give up." Those words inspired Ikazuchi at a younger age to keep training and become stronger than his enemies. Every time that Ikazuchi tells himself to never give up when his body is tired and seemingly useless, his body seems to regain energy, and Ikazuchi becomes motivated to keep at whatever it is that he is currently doing.

Ikazuchi displays unique ability when he engages in combat. Depending on the strength of his opponent, he may use different methods of fighting. Against a highly ranked enemy, he is more likely to use mid-range and long distance techniques, and against an opponent of the same level or lower, he may revert to using his Taijutsu. Being impressively strong, Ikazuchi is, sure enough; however, his weakest fighting method is Genjutsu. Spending most of his time mastering his Ninjutsu and Taijutsu abilities meant that he never spent equal time training in the art of using Genjutsu. He is able to perform some illusionary techniques, but his knowledge of performing Genjutsu is significantly low compared to a Genjutsu master.

In his knowledge of performing elemental jutsu, Ikazuchi is able to perform three types of elemental techniques, the Raiton (Lightning), Fuuton (Wind), and a few Doton (Earth) elements. Ikazuchi is spectacular at performing his powerful Fuuton techniques, but he is truly a master at performing his Raiton techniques, especially because he has a developed affinity for the lightning element. The Doton element Ikazuchi rarely uses, thus, he has barely tapped into its true strengths.

Likes & Dislikes:

Likes:

  • Kumogakure
  • Females
  • Ramen
  • Lightning

Dislikes:

  • Konohagakure
  • Other Jinchuuriki
  • Couches
  • Gum

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Ikazuchi Kumori: Jinchuuriki of The Gobi 65051875

Clan Name: Kumori
Kekkei Genkai: Kumori
Clan Symbol: -
Clan Jutsu: Kumori
Clan History: Kumori



Ikazuchi Kumori: Jinchuuriki of The Gobi 65744254

Country: Kirigakure no Sato
Village Rank: Genin
Skill Rank: D



Ikazuchi Kumori: Jinchuuriki of The Gobi 33985926

Skill Specialty:
Ikazuchi
Main: Ninjutsu

Bijuu
Main: Ninjutsu (Only accessible through Tail Transformation.)
Main: Genjutsu (Only accessible through Tail Transformation.)

Elemental Affinity:
Ikazuchi
Main: Raiton (Lightning)

Bijuu
Main: Raiton (Lightning)
Main: Doton (Earth) (Only accessible through Tail Transformation.)
Main: Fuuton (Wind) (Only accessible through Tail Transformation.)
Main: Suiton (Water) (Only accessible through Tail Transformation.)
Main: Katon (Fire) (Only accessible through Tail Transformation.)

Special Characteristics:

The Gobi is best known as the God of Illusions, but before too much is dwelled into in that regard it is important to note that the Gobi has the distinction of possessing all five basic elements. This is the main power transferred to the Jinchuuriki that houses him and is by far the most well known of his varied abilities. Our friend the Gobi likes to think of himself as the ultimate warrior, having the mastery of the elements as well as the ethereal and occult. Inuten or “Heavens Dog” as he is called is very powerful, meaning that not all of his power can be directly transferred to user. To only compound this matter the seal placed on the Gobi has constricted his powers even more. The lid of the urn that once held him at the Twin’s request now rests on his back and is twisted into his image. It controls the release of chakra given to the holder so that the natural disasters he is capable of do not all rush out at once. Tsunami’s, Firestorms, Lightning Storms, Earthquakes and Tornados do not plague the land because of this ‘lid’, but no one is sure what would happen if it were removed. But, it is possible for the Jinchuuriki to use all five basic elements, albeit it will be at weaker levels than that of a normal shinobi at least for most of his or her life. It is also said that the Jinchuuriki might be able to use an advanced element at will for a great cost. It is not known what exactly this power could do if uncapped.

The illusions we spoke about briefly before however are in fact the more unknown the Gobi’s distinctions but his most prized ability. In addition to the elemental competency of the ninja, the Jinchuuriki will be granted the ability of illusion, long lasting and extremely powerful. But, the effects on the Jinchuuriki are more subtle and layered. Starting from the lowest levels the Illusionary aspects layer into the Jinchi’s mind and place them in a constant Genjutsu from the moment they awake to the moment they go off to sleep, only relieved during the night where the Genjutsu is out of the Gobi’s control and the connection becomes so strong between the two that the Jinchi dreams as the Gobi does. Doing this allows the Jinchuuriki to actually witness Genjutsu being cast by seeing ghostly white apparitions just as the Gobi would. On the same level, while the Jinchi becomes stronger he/she will eventually be able to reflect Genjutsu back using those ghostly apparitions. Conversely, the Gobi gives his ability to cast Genjutsu to his holder over time. In some of the smaller forms the ability is done through a handsign, and that slowly changes into a sight based application. The Illusions granted by the Bijuu are over-the-top and very powerful, though they cost the Jinchi nearly twice the chakra that a normal one would and without the Gobi’s assistance a single one of these would be the final Genjutsu the Jinchi would be able to cast. In some regards the Illusionary aspects of the power could come through very nicely with lesser effects. For instance the Jinchi could cast a Genjutsu making him invisible to the world for an extended period of time. However, as stated..this ability unlike the elemental effects given to the Jinchuuriki cost pure chakra with every effect and are very tiring, so fatiguing in fact that the stronger techniques can weaken the muscles of the user with each use.

The Gobi is the third strongest of the Tailed Beasts and as such it will give its holder a great deal of power. Though, it does not have the stamina of the others, as it is only the fifth amongst stamina. As such it will give its holder a power and speed boost along with chakra, but nowhere near the extend of some of the other Bijuu. Bluntly speaking the Bijuu gives his power to his caretaker via ghastly white chakra that floats around him/her and slowly morphs the user into the Bijuu. The spiritual manifestation slowly takes over the Jinchuuriki and the chakra becomes denser and denser. The weakness if anything of the Gobi is that he is near the middle of the Stamina Levels in comparison to some of the other Bijuu. The Five-Tails is the 3rd in strength among his peers and as such passes both is feral fighting style and immense strength to the holder of his power. However, he cannot give the user an obscene amount of chakra, only increasing the total amount of the chakra useable by the Jinchi finite amount, unlike that of the Eight Tails or Nine Tails. The chakra that the Bijuu does give however can be used very effectively and in a very controlled manner in such applications as the Elements and the Genjutsu used by the Jinchuuriki. The chakra can also heal the user in a rapid fashion, but it is not as malleable as some of the others meaning it cannot expand and move. But, if used correctly…this power is intense.

The true ability of the Bijuu is the combination of the basic elements to create catastrophes, and with enough power, it will indeed create disasters, but most likely this will come at the expense of the Jinchiuuriki’s own life, something Gobi would be very against. Only because he does not want to die either, but either way this culmination is the strongest aspect of the Gobi. Though for the moment this ability is controlled. These natural disasters are locked away behind the sealing of the Twin’s keeping at bay his most destructive forces, though for the record he is still mighty powerful. If the Gobi was released however no one is sure what would happen, though there is no influence on the Jinchuuriki from the natural disasters the Bijuu can cause..that does not mean that the Gobi at full power would be without his total arsenal.
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The Five Tails: The five tails of the Gobi are known for each possessing an element used by the ninja of the world. Little however do people understand the tails for what they are, the physical and spiritual manifestation of the destruction the Gobi represents. Each is purely his power and even though they are transferred to the Jinchuuriki through the ‘lid’ that filters them for their strongest effects the tails are still extremely powerful and hold the bulk of the chakra from the Gobi. It is imperative then that the Jinchuuriki of the Gobi use the tail both as the weapon and shield as well as the medium for the element it represents. Each tail has its own drawback as well as its own strengths. However, it is important to known that each tail also represents a series of emotions that also transfer to the Jinchuuriki, making it even more complicated to fight with the Gobi, who by all means is such an impressive form that he commands the area around him. It will be expunged upon later just how these tails will work together but it is notable that multiple tails must be activated in order to use some of the more complicated combinations the Gobi is capable of. But, in doing so the emotions also pile up and subtract depending on the situation as well as compound with the Jinchi’s own emotions, making battles intensely chaotic both inside and out. Though, understanding these emotions or even having the Gobi pull back some of their intensity is possible, though no one understands just how to do such a thing.

Katon [Fire]
The tail of Fire controlled by the Gobi consists of an intense flame that permeates out in a thick column, only to expand out even further near its tip, giving it a brush like effect. The tail is purely fire, and begins actually as a white flame and quickly dissolves into a red one, tipped with yellow. The powers of the tail include complete control over fire and the ability to release fire by use of the tails own flame or its conducted power. Searing hot weapons and fantastic barrages of heat can be throw about and with this tail the user becomes a walking matchbook. However, very weak against water Jutsu being hit while using this tail could be devastating to the Jinchuuriki. Arguably the most balanced of the tails this one is very good when dealing with an unknown foe. However, the individual drawback lies in the emotions given with the tail. Hatred wells inside of the user while this tail is activated, something that comes from the Gobi’s influence and his thoughts on the element itself. During this tail, the Jinchuuriki will be privy to immense hatred of his foe, something that can cause him/her to go too far in defeating the enemy. The intense hatred can create a passion to over-attack and go berserk the foe.[Hatred]

Fuuton [Wind]
The tail of Wind controlled by the Gobi consists of a spirally warp of wind that is very transient in nature. It appears both of a misty green smoke or a raging torrent depending on the situation, and when it begins to spin the devastation can certainly follow. The powers of the tail include complete control over wind and the ability to release wind by use of the tails own power or its conducted power. Intensely sharp jets or rushing whirlwinds can be formed and the user of this tail becomes a walking tornado. However, very weak against fire Jutsu being hit while using this tail could be devastating to the Jinchuuriki. Arguably the most offensive of the tails this one is very good when dealing with out quick damage. However, the individual drawback lies in the emotions given with the tail. Pride and confidence wells inside of the user while this tail is activated, something that comes from the Gobi’s influence and his thoughts on the element itself. During this tail the Jinchuuriki will be privy to immense pride of his ability, something that can cause him/her to go too far in defeating the enemy. This cockiness can lead the Jinchi to make stupid decisions and underestimate the situation. [Pride]

Raiton [Lightning]
The tail of Lightning controlled by the Gobi consists of an insane crackling bolt of lightning sometimes assisted by a pitch black cloud to act as a generator of the said lightning all depending on the moment and the mood of the Gobi. The powers of the tail include complete control over lightning and the ability to release lightning by use of the tails own charge or its conducted power. Shockingly powerful bolts and catastrophic beams of energy can be launched at the enemies of the user, who becomes for all reasoning a moving thunderstorm. However, very weak against wind Jutsu being hit while using this tail could be devastating to the Jinchuuriki. Arguably the most costly of the tails this one is very good when one needs to not only stun but potentially rip the enemy into shreds much like the wind would but with arguably more uses. However, the individual drawback lies in the emotions given with the tail. Insanity is the only way to describe it, and it wells inside of the user while this tail is activated, something that comes from the Gobi’s influence and his thoughts on the element itself. During this tail the Jinchuuriki will be privy to uncontrollable feelings about everything in the world, all given to him in random fashion and making it very hard to do one thing and not another at the same time. Decisions made in this form are hardly ever sound. [Insanity]

Doton [Earth]
The tail of Earth controlled by the Gobi consists of a powerful set of heavy stones that grind over one enough and dribble out sand; it also takes the form of pure mud depending on the mood or inclination of the Bijuu at the time. The powers of the tail include complete control over earth and the ability to release earth by use of the tails own stone or its conducted power. Brutal bludgeons and crushing wall can be formed during this form, and all the while the user becomes a waling juggernaut. However, very weak against lightning Jutsu being hit while using this tail could be devastating to the Jinchuuriki. Arguably, the easiest to control of the tails this one is very good when preparing for a long fight. However, the individual drawback lies in the emotions given with the tail. A complete lack of emotion and lose of feeling forms and wells inside of the user while this tail is activated, something that comes from the Gobi’s influence and his thoughts on the element itself. . During this tail the Jinchuuriki will be privy to complete blankness in thought and feeling, which could lead to unneeded death and a lack of control over all because no limitation is placed upon both the destruction or the target.

Suiton [Water]

The tail of Water controlled by the Gobi consists of a shimmering wave of water locked in place, it also takes the form of a bubbling mass or a mixture of the two. It has many forms as the water does, and it is conceivable that it could even freeze if the Gobi wished it to, as it is merely a whim of the beast. The powers of the tail include complete control over water and the ability to release water by use of the tails own tap or its conducted power. Flooding and crashing attacks can be formed as well as a myriad of different creatures and defensive mechanisms by this tail which at the same time turns the Jinchuuriki into a living ocean. . However, very weak against earth Jutsu being hit while using this tail could be devastating to the Jinchuuriki. Arguably the most defensively oriented form and the most malleable this tail is very good when striking in many different directions and dealing with what is around you.. However, the individual drawback lies in the emotions given with the tail. Sadness spawns and wells inside of the user while this tail is activated, something that comes from the Gobi’s influence and his thoughts on the element itself. During this tail the Jinchuuriki will be privy to horrible sorrow for all things in their lives and will have to battle through such pain and lose to release the tail. [Lament]
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Genjutsu:The illusionary ability of the Gobi is its secondary effect and allows the Jinchi to cast high level Genjutsu that trap the enemy in various worlds and cause actual pain to the foe. The high level techniques draw from the Gobi’s ability and lead to the forms being released as well as strain the entire body of the user. While at the same time the Genjutsu ability is very controlled by the Bijuu, he actually uses it at all times to protect his young holder. By casting a Genjutsu in the waking moments of each day and holding it throughout the day the Gobi can give his abilities to the Jinchuuriki. For instance a visual impairment will occur when a Genjutsu is cast to tip of the Jinchuuriki, and this power will eventually grow to be able to reflect such Genjutsu back. Specifically speaking the Jinchi will witness ghostly apparitions that will distort the inner-mind of the Jinchuuriki and warn him/her.

The Illusionary ability of the Gobi is very potent and can easily defeat an enemy. Most of his attacks can lock the target into a long and potentially painful Genjutsu that he has complete control over. For the Gobi this is a simple matter, but for the Jinchuuriki this is much harder to do and requires not only intense chakra but it requires some life force to use and some muscular strength, which could lead to further problems down the road of life. The list of potentially attacks is as follows: Tormenting illusions of pain, Intense and long lasting scenes of Illusion, deterioration of the mind through Illusion, Supplementary Illusions to hide, defend and protect the Gobi and the Jinchuuriki. As stated the drawback to the use of the powerful illusions is the use of life energy and large portions of chakra as well as muscular strength and dexterity.
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Special Abilities:
~~~~Triggers~~~~
The main trigger for the power of the Gobi revolves around the situation of the Jinchuuriki. If the Jinchi is under extreme fire then it is conceivable that Inuten will take over in small capacities. It can be broken down into pain, fear, anger, and insanity. To begin, if the Jinchuuriki was in a great deal of pain then the lack of control could lead to the Gobi exercising dominance of his counterpart. This is prevalent in times where the Jinchuuriki is too damaged to fight, because of this inability, the Bijuu could take over and attempt to fight its way out of the situation. In times of fear, when the Jinchi is incapable of saving himself through terror then the Gobi can use this lack of focus to take over and fight.

Anger works on the same wavelength as the other two, as does insanity. The correlation between them is a lack of focus that could be harmful to both Gobi and its holder. The Gobi, being an honorable fighter relying on his strength would only fight when he it is important, a lesson he learned at the hands of the Kyuubi, who he now waits for. Because the Gobi is waiting until the Kyuubi is within striking range, he tries to reserve as much of his power as possible, but finds times of importance to be the best times to give into his lust for power. Though, his innate honor demands he not die until he has killed the Kyuubi.

He is not naturally evil, though a beast unconcerned with the feelings of others he has a sick respect for the Kyuubi, and wants to beat him on equal terms, and if that happens to be as a sealed beast then that is the way it must be. The Gobi is a strange one but he can be described in that context, he is forceful and focused and he expects the same from his subordinate who just happens to house him.


Tailed Forms:
~~Unleashed /Battle/Released Form:~~
Spoiler:
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~~Notes Section on Powers~~
The main power of the Gobi is the five elements. Though the Jinchuuriki does not need to call upon the beasts power to use the elements he does need to use it to have the full power of the elements. At Genin the Jinchi cannot use any elemental Jutsu, and Chuunin he/she can use C ranks of all five elements, and at Jounin he/she can use B ranks of all five. Not until the Jinchuuriki surpasses that level can they master each of the elements. This would mean that though all five elements are present the Jinchuuriki would never have a complete mastery of the elements without the aid of his Bijuu until he reaches the utmost in his power. They would not then be able to use an A or S rank technique without some release of the Gobi’s power. One side aspect of this power however is the use of advanced elements. At the cost of sheer chakra and extreme fatigue the Jinchuuriki can use 1 Jutsu of an advanced element. Again however, this one Jutsu will come at the cost of extreme fatigue, muscle failure, possible stroke and heart-attack, and an excessive amount of chakra.

[0 elements at Genin, All 5 at Chuunin C rank, All 5 B rank Jounin, A & S rank only in released of tailed forms]

The illusionary ability of the Gobi is its secondary effect and allows the Jinchi to cast high level Genjutsu that trap the enemy in various worlds and cause actual pain to the foe. The high level techniques draw from the Gobi’s ability and lead to the forms being released as well as strain the entire body of the user. The illusions we spoke about briefly before however are in fact the more unknown the Gobi’s distinctions but his most prized ability. Starting from the lowest levels the Illusionary aspects layer into the Jinchi’s mind and place them in a constant Genjutsu from the moment they awake to the moment they go off to sleep, only relieved during the night where the Genjutsu is out of the Gobi’s control and the connection becomes so strong between the two that the Jinchi dreams as the Gobi does. Doing this allows the Jinchuuriki to actually witness Genjutsu being cast by seeing ghostly white apparitions just as the Gobi would. On the same level, while the Jinchi becomes stronger he/she will eventually be able to reflect Genjutsu back using those ghostly apparitions. Conversely, the Gobi gives his ability to cast Genjutsu to his holder over time. In some of the smaller forms the ability is done through a handsign, and that slowly changes into a sight based application. The Illusions granted by the Bijuu are over-the-top and very powerful, though they cost the Jinchi nearly twice the chakra that a normal one would and without the Gobi’s assistance a single one of these would be the final Genjutsu the Jinchi would be able to cast. In some regards the Illusionary aspects of the power could come through very nicely with lesser effects. For instance the Jinchi could cast a Genjutsu making him invisible to the world for an extended period of time. However, as stated..this ability unlike the elemental effects given to the Jinchuuriki cost pure chakra with every effect and are very tiring, so fatiguing in fact that the stronger techniques can weaken the muscles of the user with each use.

[Feel Genjutsu-Genin, See Genjutsu-Chuunin, Reverse Genjutsu-Jounin]

Flaws/Weaknesses:

General: The most blatant drawback of the Gobi’s power lies in its greatest strength, its multiple elements. Because the average or even exemplarity ninja cannot learn all five elements, the Jinchuuriki assigned to the Gobi is prone to having chakra problems. An example is that even though the Jinchi can use all five basic elements he cannot use the highest level of the techniques, at least as far as we know. Drawing on the power from the Bijuu is also hard on the chakra system for someone like the Jinchuuriki, because they do not possess the highest amounts of control over each element whenever the Gobi takes over and uses a great deal of that elemental chakra it will most likely incapacitate the ninja and or at the very least leave them without the ability to manipulate elemental chakra, and more likely all charka for a brief deal of time.

The illusionary aspect of the Bijuu is much easier to control but much more fatiguing. The Jinchuuriki could create large-scale illusions of high-level caliber that can be extremely effective but it will be at a huge cost of chakra as well as muscular stamina. At a rate of 2x chakra consumption and a daunting pressure pressed on the body the ninja can create the immense Illusion-Type Genjutsu that the Gobi can create. While lighter Genjutsu would be easier to use and would not draw from the bodies strength the chakra consumption would still be a great deal higher than the usual cost. At the same time the life force used to create such illusions can shorten the life of the ninja using this power and could make a very sickly warrior. So, even though this ability is not as controlled at the elemental skill of the Bijuu the drawback of using this ability is much greater.

So yes, even with the great deal of power that can be transferred there are great deals of risks involved. Even if the Gobi does not particularly want to escape its prison, he does have a great deal of ability to pass along to his master. The ability of both the elements and of Illusion are a great testament to his power, however he does not have as much chakra as some of the other Tailed Beasts, meaning he cannot give his holder an infinite ability to fight on or heal him/her in great deals. This means for the later forms the healing process of the Jinchi is a few days compared to Naruto’s few hours or seconds. Though he is given the healing aspect of the Bijuu as well as the myriad of skills possessed by the Bijuu the Jinchuuriki in essence is a sprinter. He/she is given a large amount of ability but using it is brutally efficient and very taxing. Without transforming into the Bijuu the user is greatly controlled in what he may use and is never given the full extent of the ability privy to him/her.

The influence of the Bijuu manifests itself not so much mentally but physically on the Jinchuuriki. The holder will be given red lines that trace the body atop the skin and act as the conduit or medium for the Bijuu’s chakra. He/she will also be given black eyes that carry the constant Genjutsu effect that protects and yet harms the Jinchi. During the sleeping hours the two forces of Jinchi and Bijuu become very interlocked and they dream the same things, this causes powerful images and strange visions to occur and is sometimes mentally unnerving. The white hair is just a side-effect as well, but the physical strain is very prominent. Though it does not all occur at once, use of the Bijuu’s power is crippling to the user and can shorten the life of the user by hours with each use as well as lead to major muscular issues such as heart attack.

[Elements- No use of A or S ranks without transformations]

[Genjutsu-Uses 2x as much chakra, those of A rank involve muscular stamina and those of S rank involve life-force]

[Influence-The Bijuu gives his Jinchuuriki red markings that run along the body and act as conduits for his energy and power. Black eyes are transferred to the holder and the constant Genjutsu ability that manifests itself. White hair is another giveaway.]

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~Note Section for Drawbacks~~
During the transformations the drawbacks are equivalent to the rank of the ninja. The Drawbacks given are the base drawback for each tail at its approved rank. The effect is both decaying and expanding depending on the rank of the ninja. This means, that if for example a Jounin entered the first tailed state and left it the damage done to his/her body would be less than that of the Genin entering the first state. However, if for some reason a Genin entered the four tail state they would die.

This is a complete reciprocal effect as well; the power attainable and controllable work in harmony. The tailed forms acquirable at varying levels of power are the base tail that is controllable, for example the two tails for a Genin would be impossible to control and the side-effects of using the power would be much greater than if a Jounin were to enter the two tails form. Though there is no constant drawback to having the Gobi there is a side-effect for every use of the Bijuu’s power and if ever the Gobi grew so dominant that he could be released at his will then the effects on the Jinchuuriki could be catastrophic.

But, there are health issues associated with this Bijuu. As many canines are plagued with health issues so is the Jinchuuriki holding this canine. He/she is plagued with health issues the more the Bijuu’s power is used, with every use the Jinchi will shorten his life by minutes or hours and will weaken his/her body, requiring intense muscular stamina to maintain a good form. The use of the Elemental tails however though less taxing on the body are more taxing on the chakra system, using an A or S rank of any element without aid from the Gobi will knock out the Jinchuuriki and after using one of the tails the chakra system will need a moment to reboot itself leaving the Jinchuuriki helpless.



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Name: Sorakiri [Heaven Cutter]
Appearance:

Sorakiri isn't as old as the last Great Treasure, but it is still considered to be quite old by sword standards go. This sword, unlike the last one was created for the sole purpose of combat and combat is exactly it has seen a lot of. Staying in line with the quality of the blade from the last sword, it was crafted in over a hundred days of straight work. The blade itself is composed of several different types of metal that enhance its aesthetic qualities, endurance and cutting ability, creating a perfect blend of metals to create a blade that could transcend the heavens itself. And that's where it got its name from, for having a blade so magnificent it held the possibility to cut the heavens and all that lies beyond it. Of course, that's what a man would call their masterpiece, so it was merely out of respect of his own work. Now, onto the qualities of the blade that was forged. It is mainly composed of titanium, a rough, tough and durable type of metal that is seen in many types of structures and tools so it was no wonder it was the base metal. And then silver was added, along with platinum, for its color and sheen. Not only that, but when it was complete it would have a certain color with it and liquids as well as leftovers from what it cut would slide off it with ease which left a rather clean cut. And of course, steel was another component of it. However, the strangest addition to the mix was the diamond dust. The diamond dust wasn't exactly dust, but rather finely cut diamonds that were nearly impossible to see with the naked eye. Adding that to the cutting edge of the blade at the end would create a blade that could cut through plenty of tough objects. The concept was that when cutting through a tough target, the diamond dust along the blade's edge would grind into the target and the diamonds would rub together to make cutting even easier. When the blade was finally complete, it ended up being something between a slate blue and silver color, with sparkling streaks of white along the edge. The blade is exactly four feet long, an inch thick and about a couple centimeters thick. Just like the previous sword, it has a rather easy to wield grip and the same family seal was placed at the butt of the sword. What also aids to the sword's name is the seal place along one of the flat sides of the blade. The seal consists of a couple kanji characters with five more bordering it. The seal allows for its wielder to charge the seal with their chakra and then release it as a small outward explosion of pure chakra which can be shaped into crescent shapes when swung simultaneously

Rank: C
Special Abilities:

[-] Flare – By charging their chakra into the seal, the wielder can later release it in the form of an outward explosion of chakra that can be formed into crescent shapes when swung simultaneously. The power of the seal's effect is solely dependent on the amount of chakra stored up within the seal before it's released. Unless the sword is swung, the chakra release is merely a short ranged ability and can only be used to burst the chakra forward for a concussive burst similar like a burst of wind capable of pushing things backward. However, when the sword is swung as the chakra is released, the chakra builds up along the blade's edge and forms itself in the shape of the blade's edge as it rushed forward capable of cutting what's in its path.

[-] Blood Lock – A crest is at the butt of the hilt ensures that only those with the family blood can wield it, burning the hands of all those who attempt to touch the hilt in attempt to wield it. However, if Takeo were to engrave the name of someone somewhere on the sword with theirs, that gives that specific person consent to wield it, though that person cannot do the same for someone else.



[-] Wielder must be holding the hilt of the sword in order to charge the seal

[-] Because it relies on the charge up of chakra, the seal has to be charged before the ability can be used and has to be charged up over time. Not only that, but the amount of chakra within the seal at the time of release determines the ability's power. Zero posts of charging would be equivalent to a E-Rank jutsu. One post would be equivalent to a D-Rank jutsu. Two Posts would be equivalent to a C-Rank Jutsu. Three posts would be equivalent to a B-Rank jutsu. Four posts would be equivalent to an A-Rank jutsu. Six posts would be equivalent to an S-Rank jutsu, however if used at full charge the seal will cease to be usable for the rest of the thread.

[-] Also, in addition to that, the size and power of the effect is also accounted for and has definite limitations. The E-Rank charge can create a small outward explosion when not being swung that has enough force to push something back by a foot or create a “blade” that is only about a foot long and can only cause minor cut when swung. The D-Rank can either have a push back effect of two feet or create a “blade” that is two feet long and can cause minor cuts. The C-Rank charge can either have a push back effect of five feet or create a “blade” that is five feet long and has enough power to cause moderate cutting damage though strong enough to cut through wooden objects with ease. The B-Rank charge can either have a push back effect of fifteen feet or create a “blade” that is fifteen feet long and has enough strength to cut through stone. The A-Rank charge can either have a push back effect of thirty feet or create a blade that is thirty feet long and has enough to cut through most unreinforced metals with ease. The S-Rank charge can either have a push back effect of a hundred feet or can create a “blade” that is a hundred feet long and strong enough to cleave a small mountain in two.

[-] Though it takes minimal effort to add chakra to it periodically, it still takes away from the wielder's reserves and depending on how much they charge the seal up with will determine exactly how much drain they want to subject themselves with

[-] When the sword is swung regardless if the ability is being used or not, where it was swung leaves sparkling particles in the air. Not only that, but the cutting edge of the sword actually sparkles as well, even in low light, meaning the sword's wielder somewhat loses some stealth.

[-] Those with the ability to see chakra like byakugan or sharingan users would be able to decipher how much chakra is actually charged up at any given time. Not only that, but the seal charges up, the five small kanji characters bordering the large one will light up one after another, each one corresponding to a different charge level. And when it's fully charged, the middle seal will glow brightly, sometimes giving the sword's wielder away when they're about to strike

[-] Wielder must have the needed chakra reserves to even use the higher level charges

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History:

Pre-Academy Arc
Kumori Ikazuchi was born into the slowly dying clan residing within Kumogakure, known as the Kumori Clan. Ikazuchi was born on the day the first attack on the village since the great shinobi war. His father and other clansmen all fought to keep out the beast. The raikage ordered all non-ninja to stay underground while the fight went on outside. This attack was not like others. A Beast that only could be described as one of the Sudo-Bijuu. By the looks of it this was the first of the several more. The Raikage took action and went to join the battle as well. Different men like Kuro Ishiba went head on with the beast and had their limbs torn off. Other men like John Kiske head captain of the ANBU Black ops. Tried to ambush the Bijuu, but were sucked into the massive winds the Bijuu was producing. The Raikage spoke with Ikazuchi's Father and spoke to him about the power of this Bijuu and how he could engulf the village in a storm with one fowl swoop. Kazaharku couldn't let that happen to his family he didn't want it to end in such a terrible manner. Kazaharku watched as others gave their lives for the Kumo village and how others fled from the village only to be sucked into the Bijuu's massive power. Kazaharku spoke to the Raikage of how they could end this madness. The raikage spoke on the conditions it would take and who it would take the lives of both Kazaharku and Ikazuchi. Kazaharku agreed to the terms and went back home to get his son.

Back at his residential building his wife and kids were waiting. His wife hated the idea of cursing her own child with a demon. She obliged to the idea and gave her child to the father. Naito was already gone and she was about to lose one more. The pain she felt was unmatched to that of death. Kazaharku brought back his new baby boy, and he and the raikage both set out for the Bijuu. They found it and caught the Bijuu's attention. Kazaharku performed the first sealing method Sealing of Body and Soul Technique [Reiniku no Chouin Jutsu] After performing the needed set of hand seals, the Kazaharku will began to use his chakra to pull the spirit of the Bijuu creature into Ikazuchi. This process lasts a few hours to perform, but this time Kazaharhu put all his chakra into the seal and would be able to get it done in the next 10 min. Thus, it is an exhausting technique. The Bijuu was led into the center of a trigram that was drawn on the ground, once the spirit that is being imprisoned has been 20% sealed, the body becomes too weak, so know it was the Raikage turn to finish the job. The Raikage performed a string of hand seals and began to work on his jutsu, Shishou Fuuin - Four Image Seal. Now with the first seal finished he performed The Hakke no Fuuin Shiki jutsu which was used to make the two Shishou Fuuin allow the escape of the Bijuu's chakra back into Ikazuich's own chakra. This allows Ikazuchi to draw on the chakra of the Bijuu and still keep the Bijuu itself imprisoned. Ikazuchi can access this chakra whenever he experiences heightened emotions or when his own chakra is drained.

The raikage was starting to become weak so he thought he would end it right know. The Raikage performed his last jutsu. The end was near the spirit of the Bijuu was going too sealed and locked away in the belly of Ikazuchi. The Raikage called out his final words "Snake, Boar, Ram, Rabbit, Dog, Rat, Bird, Horse, Snake, Shiki Fuujin - Corpse Spirit Sealing Method." Kazaharku knew knew that jutsu and he quickly ran to the Raikage and begged him to stop. " Its not worth it please stop!," He yelled with tears coming down his face. His last words before his death was for Kazaharku to send Ikazuchi to Konoha with a letter explain what happened there he would be safe. After calling forth the Shinigami (Death God) with the proper hand seals, the Raikage handed over his soul in exchange for the Death God removing the soul from the Bijuu. The ultimate sacrificial jutsu, but the Death God will still remove the original caster's soul. With this know done the beast was finally sealed away into Ikazuchi who was sleeping at the time. The Soul of bother the demon and the raikage were ripped out and the bijuu was sealed inside of Ikazuchi while the raikage gave his soul for his village. Kazaharku went on to Leaf Village and he did the orders that the the raikage gave him. He set his child in front of a house knocked on the door and left. When he returned back to the village he told the people of the Raikage sacrifice but not about his son.

Ikazuchi was found in a filthy blanket in Konoha. He was raised there by two loaners. He was found with a Kanta and a Note reviling his Name, Age, Clan, and why he was there. They wanted a son so very badly but his wife wasn't able to concede. When they found Ikazuchi they thought it was a blessing from the gods. He was brought to the attention of the Hokage and was put in the books as an official leaf civilian. They enrolled him when he was 7 into the ninja academy so they he would grow up to be a great ninja like are father before him. Ikazuchi was a great ninja it came natural to him. He was a big success to his parents Shibi and Kiba Lores.

As he grew Ikazuchi began training alone by himself during his time away from the Ninja Academy, so that he could someday achieve a higher level than in the stories his father told him about his father. However, the most he did when he trained at such a young age was mainly just shuriken throwing. It wasn’t until a year had passed when he was Eight years old, that he came to his senses and asked his older cousin, Yasuto, to train him. At this time, Lores Yasuto was Seventeen years old, and a Chuunin ranked shinobi.Yasuto was the son and only child of Lores Ganduro, who was Kiba’s younger brother, and only other sibling. Ganduro was a Jounin; however, he died on a mission when Yasuto was at the age of Four years.

Academy Arc
Yasuto began training Ikazuchi with the basic skills, such as, proper shuriken throwing, weapon utilization and basic Taijutsu skills. One year later, when Ikazuchi was at the age of Nine years, Yasuto began teaching him how to perform the simple Clone Technique as well. After Ikazuchi had learned the Clone Technique, Yasuto began teaching him how to manipulate chakra, so that he would be able to use as little chakra as possible when performing jutsu, by teaching him the Act of Tree Climbing [Kinobori no Waza]. At this time, Ikazuchi was a very fortunate student, not only was Konohagakure’s Ninja Academy teaching him ninja skills, but also, his Chuunin ranked cousin was teaching him techniques in advance. Ikazuchi excelled compared to the other students in the academy, and he was always at the head of his class.

At the age of Ten years, Ikazuchi had proven to his mentor, Yasuto, that he possessed enough potential to be a splendid ninja in the future. He began teaching him how to exert chakra, and then when Ikazuchi was able to do that correctly, he taught him how to exert chakra and transform it into electricity at the same time. This process was somewhat difficult for Ikazuchi since he was at such a young age, and he had never been able to morph his chakra into electricity. But a few months after he started learning how to create electricity from his chakra, Yasuto began teaching him to fuse his electricity with the metal in the blade of a sword, to increase the sharpness of the blade excessively.

As Yasuto wanted, Ikazuchi became interested with sword utilization in battle. After he succeeded with fusing electricity into metal, Yasuto began teaching Ikazuchi the basics of sword usage. When Ikazuchi reached the age of Eleven years, he was able to use a sword exceptionally well. While he and Yasuto still trained at the usage of swords, Yasuto began teaching him to exert electricity in the palm of his hand, and maintain a sphere shaped form. The training of this technique for Ikazuchi lasted a while; however, a few months before turning Twelve years old, he had the basics of this technique learned.

Upon reaching the age of Twelve years, Ikazuchi graduated from Konohagakure’s Ninja Academy, and became a Genin. Soon after achieving this rank, Ikazuchi mastered the use of Tenraigan. He was now able to fuse the electricity in metal objects, either to make them a deadly electrifying weapon, or increase its sharpness if it had a blade. Almost one full year later, while he and Yasuto were out training one day, Ikazuchi’s body was pushed to its limits, and he fainted. He was unconscious for a few minutes before he woke up. When he awoke, Yasuto told him that with intense training, and pushing his body to its limitations, fainting would happen more often. He also told him that he wasn't really Lores but a member of a different clan and that when he got older he should go and find out his true nature. From then on, Ikazuchi has been motivated to become as strong as possible. It was then when Ikazuchi promised Yasuto that he would become the strongest ninja to ever arise from the Konohagakure, no matter what intense training that would be required to put his body through.

Unfortunately, the next day, when Ikazuchi left his home to go out and train in solitude, his true clan was taking a turn for the worst. He would have been training with Yasuto, however, being a Chuunin ranked ninja of Konohagakure, Yasuto was required to carry out a mission in a foreign country that day. Almost a few hours of extreme training had passed, and Ikazuchi fainted. When he regained consciousness, the day had already come to nightfall. In fact, it was at least a couple of hours into the night when finally awoke. Ikazuchi rushed back home, knowing that he was in for an unpleasant surprise from his mother.

But when he arrived, he did not expect what he was seeing. His house was consumed by fire with flames roaring out of each window and doorway of the building. His reflex’s told him to react to the situation somehow. He had to do something quick, so he began running further toward his home, hoping his mother and father were not inside. When he noticed that one of the windows had only a few small flames shooting out from it, he gave a thrust with his legs, and jumped into the air toward the window, but before being able to jump through it and land inside, a hard, sudden force smashed into him in mid-air. He was sent flying backward to the ground. Before crashing into the ground, he stuck out his right hand, then pushed off of it and landed on both of his feet. Ikazuchi had no idea as to what just hit him. Only moments later, a shinobi appeared before the eyes of Ikazuchi. Based off of the armor he wore, Ikazuchi assumed the shinobi to be an ANBU operative of a foreign village.

A short moment later, the shinobi removed the mask that he had been wearing. On his forehead-protector that was strapped to his forehead, was the symbol carried by all Iwagakure ninja. Ikazuchi felt in his heart that he was the one responsible for the fire. The enemy ninja then introduced himself to Ikazuchi as, Kiseido Yuto, and explained that he was the one who caused the fire. Ikazuchi instantly knew his family was dead after Yuto confirmed that he set the building on fire. With mixed emotions of fear and rage, Ikazuchi proceeded to ask him what reason he had for killing his family.

Yuto then explained that he was only after the Kumori Clan's Kekkei Genkai, “Tenraigan.” At the time, Ikazuchi did not know what he was talking about. Therefore, he refused to believe him. Yuto continued to say that only a couple existing Kumori had ever possessed it. Being a practical sacred legendary dojutsu, this Kekkei Genkai only resided in two other shinobi of the clan. Ikazuchi was gradually starting to think about what his cousin said and now knew what the man was talking about. Yuto went on to continue explaining how he discovered it.

He said that his first encounter with “Tenraigan” was when he fought against a member of the clan nine years previous. Ikazuchi realized that he was speaking about a member of his clan. Yuto continued and told how a man named Kazaharku killed his two teammates on their mission that night after he followed them miles away from the village. He noticed the Kazaharku possessed a dojutsu, because his eyes were an unrealistic dark yellow color. Yuto assumed that his dojutsu was what was allowing him move incredibly fast. After a tedious battle, Kazaharku reached his limit in energy. He knew he wouldn’t be a match for Yuto with no chakra to support him, so Kazaharku managed to take the scroll from Yuto and with his last words being, “All for Kumogakure.” Kazaharku activated the paper bombs in his weapon pouch, and caused them to explode. The explosion killed him and destroyed the sacred scroll to prevent Yuto from handing it over to his village.

Years later, Yuto said, that he had become so obsessed with the dojutsu that he had to have it. He infiltrated his village’s mission archives, and found an older case similar to his. The description read that a shinobi from Kumogakure possessed a dojutsu named, “Tenraigan.” He did more research and read that it was a rare technique that only awakened when a Kumori member proved himself worthy to, “Denkou no Tenshu” (Literally meaning, “God of Shadows”). He continued to explain that he had broken the laws of his village by reading those files. He fled his village that night and went to Kumogakure in search of it. However, he did not find it. He killed the remaining Kumori out of anger for not finding it, and then set their residential building on fire just as he did to Ikazuchi's Home.

Thats when i recived a tip from one of the clan members that there was a lost boy who lived in konoha and that boy is you.Yuto wanted to kill Ikazuchi as well, but he knew that Ikazuchi was Kazaharku's offspring because Ikazuchi looked exactly like his father, so it was very obvious that he was the most likely candidate to inherit it. Yuto could sense the contained potential in Ikazuchi, just waiting to be unleashed. Ikazuchi was Yuto’s last hope for having Tenraigan, or so he thought. He was unaware that Lores Yasuto was away on a mission that night.

Ikazuchi couldn’t hold back any longer, so he tried to attack him, but it was all for nothing. As Ikazuchi ran toward him, Yuto quickly knocked Ikazuchi to the ground. He then told Ikazuchi to locate him when he inherited, “Tenraigan”, so that he could remove his eyes from him. With that said, Yuto fled as large groups of Konohagakure ninja started to gather close to the burning residence. With the exception of Ikazuchi, every member of the Kumori Clan was now dead or that is what he thougth.

The very next day, the Village moved Ikazuchi and Yasuto to a new home. It was smaller than their last, but it was all they had to live with. Every day after the Yuto had killed his family, and then set his home on fire, Ikazuchi spent training to become stronger, and hopefully strong enough to avenge his fallen clan. He was greatly motivated to never give up his dream of becoming stronger. Even when he grew tired, he remembered the motto of his clan, "Never give up." He just kept telling himself that, and his energy seemed to return.

Sometime after the fire, Ikazuchi returned to the burned ruins of his family’s building. It was then when he discovered that the fire revealed a door, that was once hidden, that led into an underground chamber. Inside of the chamber, was a large cabinet that stored files regarding information to about Ikazuchi and where he could find his clan.

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PostSubject: Re: Ikazuchi Kumori: Jinchuuriki of The Gobi   Ikazuchi Kumori: Jinchuuriki of The Gobi EmptyWed Jul 06, 2011 9:30 am

Name: Isutsu Pagaoda no Gobi (Five Rooms of the Five-Tails)
Rank: S Rank (Storyline)
Range:, Medium(5-10meters), Far (10meters+)
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity: None
Clan: None
Description: This is the strongest Genjutsu available to the Jinchuuriki in charge of the Gobi. After giving some life force in exchange for this technique, the user will complete the needed handsigns and activate the technique. The enemy will be quickly trapped into a pagoda, high on the tallest floor. The room there are in is larger than reality, and it contains the very essence of an individual element. For instance, the room of water is literally full of water, from floor to ceiling. The room of lightning is a set of small platforms amongst a never-ending lightning storm, the room of wind is a single stand amidst a raging tornado. The room of earth is a tunnel network full of tricks and traps while the fire room could be a raging inferno. The captured enemy must survive and find the hidden doorway out of each room, to proceed to the next one, and only by doing so will they be able to return to reality. The door is not seeable, but only recognized once the enemy approaches. After entering it the enemy will be plunged into the next room, only to repeat the process until all 5 rooms are visited. (Each room requires one post of at least 300 words to escape)

Perhaps one of the most genius Genjutsu I've ever seen... the only problem I have is the fact that the only way out is to basically type your way out lol. I'd say if one were to damage themself enough (like breaking a bone) they'd be able to escape.

Other than that I don't see many problems. This is probably the best fucking Bijuu apps I've seen and I'm excited to see this char in action. Approved unless another mod has a problem.
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Edited and Thank You
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DENIED

Only C rank jutsu and below
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Your alt can not be in the same village
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Unlocked. You cannot make a Jinchuuriki or a character from Kiri.

Reasons:

  • You cannot have two characters in same village.

  • You cannot make both a Kage and a Jinchuuriki, you can only fill one limited spot.
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According to Ian, either Kage or Jin. You cant have both.

So either Ikazuchi, or Seishin
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You can only be from Kiri or Suna, and Genin are C-Rank.
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