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| Subject: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:16 am | |
| Name: Sagano Seishin Nickname/Alias: The Apex Predator, Saga Age: 24 Gender: [M] Looks: [Head]
Appearance makes everything when first meeting someone. To Saga, his appearance in just like his family's name. He is like a river. Wild, yet tame. Constricted, yet free. His teal hair is like looking into the water itself. Many say it makes him look like a cold-hearted boy, but to those that know him he is far from that. This kindness he has is in his eyes. They shine like jewels and look endless like a clear ocean. Showing you everything they have to offer. However his pale skin shows the harshness of the weather in Kiri. Their bodies always wrapped up, they hardly have the chance to get much sun. Even wearing a large metal plate on his head seemed kinda foolish, but theirs were given a thicker clothe for the colder temperatures. His face is gentle, just like his soul. He tries hard to wear a smile on his face, but he still has a tendency to not people in the eyes. Fearing that they are judging him. [Upper Body]
Dressing warm is something that is essential in the Snow country. While many wear large fur outfits when traveling around the village and such. A shinobi cannot be restricted that much. Saga for one wears a large thick muffler. it's lining embedded with wool from black sheep. The muffler makes it easy for him to move, while not restricting his arm and leg movement too much. It also can cover his face from cold winds. It also has a attachment that can support a hood. Giving him something to cover his head if need be. It was given to him from his mother, she had collected the materials herself, and made it for him as a graduation present, along with a small charm. Well despite being in know all the time, there are many occasions in which one doesn't need to worry about their warmth, such as when in their home, or in another country. Wearing a muffler as he does, makes this transition easy. Saga's normal outfit is but a few select pieces of clothing. While not much of anything in the sense of fashion. It helps him ward off some of the cold. He wears a simple white tank top. Nothing special about it, over this is another shirt. Living in the cold makes you learn, that more clothes are better then none when you get caught in the cold. This shirt is a light blue tone. Over all of that he wears a thick jacket. He tends to keep it open, but it can be zippered shut to protect his chest from the cold. The most notable thing about the jacket it the different sleeve lengths. While studying in the academy he learned that surprise tactics often make or break a battle situation. As such he made up his own little trick. He made one of his sleeves shorter, and made secure the other was longer then his arm, to hide his hand. This would bring his opponents attention to his right hand, while he drew a hidden weapon or tool from the bottom of his jacket. Yes beneath his jacket he has a few hidden pockets. mainly to hold extra kunai or shuriken.They are set up to be easy to open and use. However one with sharp eye could spot them easily if his jacket is open. [Lower Body]
His legs are the mos important thing to cover. As such he wears a pair of long johns, to keep his body heat in. Atop this he wears a simple navy blue pair of slacks, tightened down at the cuffs by wrap. He wears a few things around his waist. These include the standard tool pouch. It hold a few kunai and shuriken an other essential tools for a shinobi to use in battle. Next to this he has a small water skin. Made from a thick oxen hide, it holds water in tight, while making sure it doesn't freeze even in the coldest weather. Saga being a water user has to have something like this around to make sure he has water to support his techniques. On his hips he has an extra pouch for kunai and shuriken. While many may see him as over weighted, he feels just right with how much he carries. Like many Kiri nin, they can't wear the standard open toed ninja sandals. Being that having exposure like that will with out a doubt freeze his toes into chucks of fleshy ice. As such their ninja sandals are closed toe, while also having a thin layer of fur to keep thier feet warm. Hair: Black Eyes: Black Body: Buff/Slim Ethnicity: Narutonese Personality: [Energetic | Lady Killer | Lovable]
[General Outlook]
A human mind is such a fickle thing. So many pleasures corrupt their thoughts, so many visions cloud them. One can even dedicate their life to just trying to find the answer as to why. While others devote their life to bring pain to others. What makes humans act such a way, is it a disease? A disease that rots humans from the inside out? Can is be cured? Is there a way to help those that have already been taken by this? I am but a child in this world. Even now I can see the corruption in the people around me, and even in myself. Will I also take this path of pleasures? Or have I already found my cure? What does a solitary person like myself have to help those around me. It takes so long for me to trust another, what hope do I have to let another trust me. ..wait, I know I can help them. I have tried so hard this far, and nothing is holding me back even now. So long as they are with me, yes them. If they are there then anything is possible. I just need to hold my head up a little higher that's all. Perhaps if I do that, then I can make other friends. Yeah! [Battle Standings]
I did it! Today was practice matches in the academy, and I won! It was hard work, but I couldn't believe I did it. I'm only an academy student, so I couldn't do cool things like those other older shinobi can, but I still tried my best. I was so scared at first though, the teacher had to tell me countless times to calm down. I was so afraid I was going to hurt the other kid, but the teacher kept reassuring me that he would stop anything that would hurt the other student, but even still I was afraid. I didn't want to hurt a fellow student. Everyone was laughing at me. I did what I always do, I held my breath and thought about daring my statues, yeah that always calmed me down. Carving those was always so relaxing, and fun. After a little bit I was ready. But the other student was so much better then me. He was already to fight as soon as we walked on to the field, and he knew Ninjutsu! They haven't even taught us that yet. He must have had his parents teach him. Cheater! It was so cold! He was blowing cold air everywhere, I couldn't even move. I didn't know what to do. I didn't have any Jutsu like he did, so I began to lose hope. That was until I finally got a glimpse of where he was standing. Even though he had that strong wind, he had grow overconfident and walked onto a thinner sheet of ice. I picked up my kunai and threw it as hard as I could. All I heard was a cracking noise, and the boy was gone! he fell right into the water. The teacher had acted fast, running across the water, and it was so cool he could stand on the water! I wish I knew how to do that, I think even the other student thought that to. The teacher pulled him out, and even though I felt like what I did wasn't really fair, the teacher declared me the winner! Likes & Dislikes: Patatoes Couches New Orleans Condoms Baskets Cases Catch Phrase: "Ugh...."
---[ The Cataclysmic Ones ]--- Clan Name: Edou Kekkei Genkai: Everybody who is born with the bloodline of the clan is capable of growing to develop their qualities. This includes not only those with both parents from the clan [I], but also those who only have one parent from it [II]. Not everyone does, however. In fact, it is possible to have the bloodline and never develop the traits or abilities of it. The amount and severity of the characteristics that the clansman develop depend solely on his connection with the demon that spawned them [III]. This happens gradually, under stressful conditions, their lives being endangered in general, or being physically pushed to the limit repeatedly. One of the biggest predications is when the person likes to conserve their chakra, using only the minimum amounts of it on any given day for battling. The more that it’s consistently expelled, the less its harmful effects will build up within the user. If conserved often enough, it will cause certain reactions. These range from having to do with an external outlet [IV] or an internal change in the chakra network [V]. I. FULLBLOODS. These are the members who are born into the clan from both of their parents being a part of it. While almost indistinguishable from their half-brethren, they are more susceptible to the effects that their chakra can have on their bodies, given the proper conditions. They also assume a rather darker-looking appearance. Members like this will have an easier time controlling their abilities, including their chakra, as it will come more naturally to them. They’re often regarded more important within the clan since their blood isn’t mixed and will allow them to prosper more over time. II. HALFBLOODS. These are members born into the clan with only one parent, their mom or their dad. As mentioned above, it’s hard to distinguish them from fullblooded members. When this happens, usually from someone in the clan being promiscuous with someone outside of their own kind, it will make the person less susceptible to the effects of their chakra under those conditions that change them. They look more normal in comparison, a bit less repugnant, and can take on physical traits from their other parent. Being mixed blood, they have a harder time learning to control their chakra and abilities, but this is by no means impossible. They’re less important within the clan, spawned from happenstance because of another members’ carnal desire. III. CONNECTION. All of the members share one trait, which is that they’re connected to a being of impure energy. Their chakra is found not only in nature itself as with anyone else, but it’s contaminated with that of the demon as well, a part of them. The weaker they show themselves to be, such as from the above circumstances ranging between physical weakness to holding back usage of their chakra in battle, the more the effects will start to occur within the clansman. In regards to chakra however, it’s not simply holding off on using it that makes the change happen, but also allowing the corrupted properties of it to linger within the body and build up day after day unexpended. The more these conditions are met, the more the demon can manifest itself within the body of the clansman. As mentioned, some members have more susceptibility than others. However, this process happens as a result of a combination: both from the infectious nature of the demon’s chakra as well as its idealistic nature, since it wants its children to succeed. IV. THE DEMON’S GAPE. This is one of the effects of allowing the clan’s chakra to build up. When chakra is used, it’s primarily focused in the solar plexus of the user as it’s becoming combined to form jutsu, or any application for that matter. Given the erratic, volatile, often destructive nature of the clan’s corrupt chakra signature, this can wreak havoc on this location over extended periods of time. This is because of the sheer concentration involved when it is used there compared to when distributed to tenketsu points. For this reason, this is where the demon manifests the most. Initially, they will be plagued with stomachaches. These are negligible, and often they become completely overlooked. Certainly not anything to be worried about, since the pain may be associated with eating the wrong foods, or any number of reasons. This is will eventually start to develop into worsening pains. Despite a suspected problem, medical ninjutsu will be useless in this case, since there is nothing physically there to cause it. The final step is where the abdomen begins to tear open. It’s at this point that the corruption is inevitable, no longer being held off. Graduating from a tear, it becomes a deep and long hole. It will begin to develop teeth. The transformation concludes with a gaped mouth, in the likeness of the demon’s maw. This secondary mouth is malleable enough to be used with jutsu, including elements, for a number of applications. It will become as a second mouth to the owner, used in the same way as their original mouths. This is a very good transition to have, because not only does it increase the surface area, but it concentrates their chakra when creating attacks. Because it’s so close to the solar plexus network—in fact, directly above it in epidermal layers—it will make the energy released from the gape readily accessible. Unhinged, raw, unpredictable, completely destructible chakra, directly from the source. V. VOLATILE CHAKRA. Chakra from the clansmen actually begins as normal. There is only the presence of the demon’s chakra within them. Eventually, though, this energy can be permitted to grow. If certain conditions are met within the owner, then their normal chakra will begin to become infected with the demon’s chakra. When fully transmogrified, it will develop a silver-gray color, assuming that it’s focused enough to even be visible. It will also rotate in any and all directions, rather than remaining dormant and unmoving. This effect is from the various types of chakra that went into the creation of the demon, involving them oscillating in several different patterns. There are a bevy of applications that this type of chakra has on its environment. Because their chakra is not rigidly confined to a standard usage, and because it can be tailored to different ends, these vary between individuals. Clan Symbol: - Clan Jutsu: The Demon’s Gape Rank: -- Range: Supplementary Category: Kekkei Genkai Affinity: -- Clan: Edou (1) Description: The Demon’s Gape, in the simplest terms, is a fully functional secondary mouth located on the user’s abdomen near their solar plexus that can be used to formulate jutsu and other chakra-based techniques. Because it’s located in this area, it’s right on top of where their chakra is formed, creating a connection between it and the source, meaning that the accessibility of chakra for this appendage is increased to a level of real-time. It’s much like the demon’s mouth that the clan is based on, that being which created them to begin with, and manifests there under specific circumstances that allow the chakra to concentrate within the body. Hando Kazenokamino [Hand of the Wind Deity] Rank: B Range: 0—20 M Jutsu Type: Kekkei Genkai • Ninjutsu Element: Wind Image Clan: Edou (1) Description: Saga peels apart the jowls in his abdomen, allowing chakra to settle in the gullet. Wind surrounds this opening and gathers in the formation of a tendril and releases, severing anything that comes inbetween the projectile and its determined target. It will impact the target like a drill, making cuts in anything that draws nigh. The function of the technique depends on the skill level that Saga is employing it and will grow in diameter, power, speed, and effectiveness the more the user develops as a shinobi and the more influence he has over The Demon’s Gape in turn. With him achieving the rank of Chuunin, the concussion is something like a boulder smashing into the target with blunt force, easily inducing internal hemorrhaging with solid contact or breaking dense bones like twigs. Name: Fuujinryuu: Ichuu za Kouro Honken (Skill of the Wind God: Running the Silk Road) Rank: A rank Range: Supplementary Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Wind Clan: None Description: This technique is derived from Saga’s Wind Collection and acts as its only supplementary weapon. This Jutsu is used as a means of travel and evasion outside of Saga’s own acrobatic style and use of his ability to transform into pure wind chakra. While moving, our hero can activate this technique by stepping onto an invisible step above his feet. He will then be launched into the sky and can move by touching what would appear to be other invisible platforms around him. In reality all Saga is doing is concentrating his powerful wind chakra at his feet and releasing it. This does however make him even harder if not impossible to hit, and his ability to evade is increased to the point that combat could be seen as pointless. However, being struck twice while using this Jutsu will completely drain Saga of his chakra supple that can be used for wind chakra from his Wind Scream Jutsu, meaning that in essence he will no longer have any chakra to create wind, leaving him with a vastly smaller amount. The drawback being that being hit too many times will stop the wind scream technique and leave Saga without an element until he has properly rested. Kaze Hanpatsu no Jutsu [Wind Repulsion Technique] Rank: B Range: 0—25 M Jutsu Type: Kekkei Genkai • Ninjutsu Element: Wind Image Clan: Edou (1) Description: Saga gathers chakra in his secondary mouth very quickly and then releases it in a way that it spreads out in a spherical manner, scattering a technique of equal or lesser magnitude away from himself and anyone in close vicinity of him. This is often a kamikaze technique. While not necessarily a self-destructive technique since there is a capacity to completely avoid an attack, Saga does put himself in harm’s way. If this technique hits a shinobi without any resistance from another energy, it can make them fly in the same direction, and can even be harmful to them. This repulsion is useless to fire-based attacks and stronger to lightning, but in many cases it can at least help shield an impact and thus reduce damage, unless the archetype of chakra is more complex in nature. Fūton: Tsuuroken [Wind Release: Pathway Blades] Rank: B Range: 0—10 M Jutsu Type: Kekkei Genkai • Ninjutsu Element: Wind Image Clan: Edou (1) Description: Saga gathers chakra into The Demon’s Gape, then immediately clamps down the teeth found within the oversized mouth, clenching both them as well as the muscles around the area. Contracting his lungs, the collective chakra becomes released into the Wind Element, becoming ripped into sections through the demonic teeth spaces. Having to be literally forced out, this technique designates multisectional paths for blades of wind to cross, released with much force. Anything they reach within the range of ten meters will become sliced in any place that the erratic and unstable chakra-converged gust fragments can make contact. Clan History: Ever since the dawn of shinobi, there have always been intricate forces going to work inside of people. The names for it are different to many civilizations: deities who bestow their power on others for their own ends, ‘chakra,’ ‘chi,’ or just ‘energy.’ The end result is the same though; some learn how to mold their chakra and work with it, such as shinobi, and others never make the connection. In the world of shinobi, this energy is often regarded as a way to alter reality to some degree through sheer force of will, whether physically or mentally. But there is more to it than that—things not quite foreseeable. Shinobi can be divided by castes, with the majority of them having pure energy in their chakra network, not defiled or unnatural. There are some, however, who are born differently, in lower castes. Their energy is not so pure, tainted from anything ranging from genetic anomaly to willful tampering from another being. Pure energy works completely in conjunction with the person, able to be used to their wills after being honed through training. However, tainted chakra does not simply dissipate, but lingers; its properties are different, altered, but still unusable after it has been expended for its purpose. It is from this altered, unnatural, and impure chakra that—through a collective process spanning eons undetected—allowed a demon to be born. This demon had no name, but its embodiment was that of a corrupt essence. It took on a physical shape, random protrusions all around, dripping with gobs of pure waste matter. It was ugly, it was a mistake, but it was also inevitable. It wasn’t only capable of chakra, but it was made with it. Hideous, contaminated quitessence with no rhyme or reason; erratic in nature, it just spun, and spun. No ebb and flow, no complex whimsy. It just lashed out at everything around it in all directions until it infected and destroyed. Not conforming to a straight path and not even rotating. Plainly and wholly unpredictable. Then it intervened. On the fifth day, humans were created, and all those amongst them in their kinship formed a clan. Country: Kirigakure no Sato Village Rank: Mizukage Skill Rank: Kage Level (S) Skill Specialty:Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Taijutsu Elemental Affinity:Main: Wind Sub: Earth Special Characteristics: Initially, Ikazuchi was a victim of the technique known as Haunt, specific to a ninja named Ranryu. Ranryu was a high ranked ninja who was caught at his prime and wasn't ready to give up life. In his time, Ranryu served as a mentor-type to different families preparing them as a vessel to continue his life because he knew that his time had drawn finite. When found out about his devious plan he was hunted down and force to use his ultimate technique. At birth this technique was performed on the small infant (Ikazuchi) and continued to exist with him. Invading his dreams on a nightly basis only served to bolster Saga’s knowledge of how the process worked. Ranryu had planned on taking over Saga's body when it was in a weakened state; that, or completely dead. The tides had turned on the mastermind though. All but dead after an assassination attempt, he tried to use the ability on Saga prematurely. This was a mistake, one not anticipated. Saga had the mental fortitude to and the sufficient viscera to, in effect, reverse the stasis of the Haunt ability on Ranryu, in the form of a technique now known as All Life Submits. Through the exploitation of the weaknesses—both in the jutsu and within Ranryu in his defeated state—he managed to lock the evil genius in a partition within his mind. Thus allowing the user to become the used. EFFECTS ON PERSONALITYOn the surface, there are no significant effects on his personality. It’s all but completely hidden from anyone that he has associations with. However, extenuating usage has caused him to become more violent in battle—though he still shows the ability to restrain them from taking over and predicting his actions. Despite this urge to utterly destroy those that he gets into squabbles with, this is nothing new, since he was born from a clan and an environment with abysmal moral virtue to begin with. He is now more perceptive of the environment around him, something that he had trouble with at times before his new found ability to focus on the minuscule. ABILITIES GRANTEDThis cohabitation has granted him complete knowledge to all of Ranryu’s secrets, from anything involving the Nisshoku to the Jekial, Jitijin, Fuuma, Uzumaki and Izanami. Anything involving his abducted bodies and the experiments concerning them, including mission history and recollected battle experiences. Nothing is hidden from Saga that Ranryu knew; nothing that he has experienced in his life. He may also draw on Ranryu and Kabuto’s congealed chakra reserves in direct correlation with All Life Submits technique. If he meets the proper conditions and level of skill, he may grow to learn techniques directly from Ranryu’s knowledge, but only if specialties and elements permit. (This does not apply to bloodline-related things, even techniques. In fact, he doesn’t get anything like nor related to that.) DOWNSIDES OF USAGEThere are some things that are useless to him that Ranryu has, such as his high-level Genjutsu techniques that he will never be able to learn for example. This is one of the more unfortunate aspects, if anything. The real danger to these perks comes with overuse. Normally Ranryu is quite easy for Saga to control and force back due to his new compartmentalized development. But if he ventures into the area in his mind where Ranryu resides too often, without allowing himself a chance to mentally exhaust the negative influences inherent within, then he is liable to have his mind completely overtaken. This applies more if he is low (or out) of his own chakra and grows dependent. Worse still, there is also a chance that both of their minds will become lost; this would result in his body being a useless flesh heap. Flaws/Weaknesses: One of my weaknesses is that I sometimes pay too much attention to details and while this skill set is crucial to projects with zero tolerance for errors, it can lead to analysis paralysis in cases of projects that require quick turnaround time. Name: (Name of weapon or item) Appearance: (A pic or brief description of the object) Rank: (What rank would this be classified as?) Special Abilities: (What abilities does this have? It can be none) Origin: (Where does this weapon come from? Why does your char have it?)
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Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: - Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.
Houshou [Crumbling Palm] Rank: A Type: Taijutsu Element: Wind Description: This technique is a signature and always involves concentrated chakra. His palm is thrust forward at the target. His most dangerous strike, a fatigued opponent may become incapacitated if this hits correctly, though not always. No matter what happens though, it is easily his most painful technique. Previous opponents will want to avoid it at all costs, earning a name so apropos because it is said to crumble anything it touches. It will be heralded by his hand glowing with chakra, with wisps of fluctuating air. This is because it is so saturated with energy that it becomes downright threatening, able to fracture bones dense as they are. Chakra converges to wind and compacts around his palm, swirling violently, noticeably increasing the pressure against his skin. When his palm comes into contact with a surface, the chakra becomes unstable, the coerced wind leaving external cuts on the target with the force alone causing internal damage.
Suppressed Chakra Expenditure Rank: A Type: Chakra Control Element: None Description: The most common reason that shinobi don't have as much longevity in battle as they should is because they cannot mold chakra to the best of their potential. Saga has circumvented this flaw by devoting almost as much time to manipulating and molding chakra as he did to physical discipline. From concentrating the minimum amount of chakra into its highest potency, Saga may cut down on the amount he expends. This also increases his overall durability when using physical techniques. This discipline does not extend to everything he does, however. When learning this ability, the focus has to be on a specific jutsu category; after that is mastered, the user may learn to utilize it on another. This is because different types of techniques have varied requirements. Taijutsu enhanced with chakra needs much more timing discipline than Genjutsu for example, which requires much better focus. Ninjutsu requires repetitive practice in large amounts. All types need a symmetrical balance when it comes to chakra, but getting to that point in the chosen category has different training methods.
Name: Rakanken [Arhat Fist] Rank: B Nature: Taijutsu Element: Fuuton [Wind Release] Range: Close [0—5 M] Description:
This style focuses on the most simple attacks with incredible strength. It takes the path of least resistance, using the shortest maneuvers with the most emphasis on power in order to immobilize or even utterly break an opponent. Subi augments these various strikes with the Wind Release affinity in order to make up for the loss in speed from their clunky and charged nature. The wind manipulation itself is subtle, used to carry his musculature more effectively, and in a way makes the areas he focuses on lighter. When used to strike an opponent, the wind output can be felt alongside the intense pressure, giving away his chakra signature. It should be noted that Subi can use Rakanken without any element, just purely chakra. However, the consequence of this is that he loses the lightweight, more efficient flowing that his strikes have when accompanied by the wind, making them slower. Or at the very least, feeling slower, which can have an effect on his ebb and flow.
羅 This technique is a signature and always involves concentrated chakra. His palm is thrust forward at the target. His most dangerous strike, a fatigued opponent may become incapacitated if this hits correctly, though not always. No matter what happens though, it is easily his most painful technique. Previous opponents will want to avoid it at all costs. It will be heralded by his hand glowing with chakra, with wisps of fluctuating air. This is because it is so saturated with energy that it becomes downright threatening, able to fracture bones dense as they are. Chakra converges to wind and compacts around his palm, swirling violently, noticeably increasing the pressure against his skin. When his palm comes into contact with a surface, the chakra becomes unstable, the manipulated wind leaving external cuts on the target with the force alone causing internal damage.
漢 Subi heaves his elbow into the target with the full weight of his body. Because the elbow is the most dense bone, not a lot is needed for this to be effective or painful. This is often a countering move, since it is easy to duck away, get in close for it and move from the opponent in quick fashion. It is not his most-used, but it is among his quickest attacks. Plus it packs enough power in its own right to create a fight-decisive injury.
拳 Subi jumps up into the air and brings his legs together, sending his body down toward his target in a slanted vertical fashion. Since this technique utilizes his full weight, there is a large amount of impact. This technique badly damages the environment, and can be quite disturbing or startling to bystanders and potential opponents. If contact is made with a person, not only will they have to contend with the force of the strike, but that of being driven into the ground. However, if he misses his target, it makes it difficult for Subi to recover back to a standing position right away.
Name: Setsunai’Taba [ | Strangling Coil | ] Rank: C Range: Close-Mid Range (0-10m) | Supplementary Jutsu Type: Akujutsu Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Description: This is an effective Akujutsu that is in some ways similar to the ability to summon hidden shadow snakes, and for that reason no hand-signs are required for this technique so long as only two whips are being created out from the backhands, as these can be controlled by Saga’s own motions instead of by the concentration of chakra manipulation in these whips. This technique forms tail-like whips from the blackened scales. These tendrils are similar to the chains Saga may wield in combat, having small black segments that link them all together with a larger, bladed tip. The bladed ends of these biological weapons can be coated in the same venom found in Saga's mouth. At most, Saga can forge four of these whips at the same time, though to control this many limits his concentration to just this technique. These whips can cut, poison, strangle, grapple, bind, or even lift the opponent. Furthermore, the whips can emerge from nearly any part of Saga's body; though most commonly emerge from Saga's spin or backhands. The skin around were these whips protrude becomes red with discomfort.
Secret Hokage Art: Chakra Reversal Rank: [Situational Dependent, D-S] Range: Close to Mid Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Note: Secret Art learned from a special Mizukage scroll. Description: A secret art guarded by every Mizukage of Kiri. This jutsu was last used by the Third Hokage against Orochimaru's dangerous "Edo Tensei" technique to cancel the summoning of the Fourth Hokage. After being adopted as as a jutsu in Kirigakure, Saga, the Shindaime Mizukage, gave access to this jutsu to Hiro for safe keeping if anything were ever to happen to Saga. After memorizing it, he destroyed the scroll and swore himself to secrecy. After performing handseals, the user is able to cancel any jutsu an enemy uses, including kekkei genkai abilities, by expending an equal amount of chakra. An A-rank jutsu would take A-rank chakra, B-rank would take B-rank, and so on. This jutsu does not work on Medical Jutsu or on any "status shift" jutsu (ex: Opening the Gates, activating a doujutsu, etc.)
The workings of the jutsu are somewhat complex. The user expends their own chakra to force the target's chakra back to its original state and position. This means that even physical effects of an elemental release (ex. an earth ditch being formed) will be reversed as the chakra will undo what it has done. The obvious drawback of the function of this jutsu, however, is that while the jutsu is reversed, the target also regains the expended chakra, as it is being replaced back into their system. Unfortunately, the user expends chakra simultaneously and does not recover it. This could potentially mean that the target could simply activate the jutsu a second time, hoping that the user will not have enough chakra or not be willing to expend the chakra to cancel it a second time. Because of this flaw, this jutsu should only be used as a last resort or if the situation can change dramatically enough to warrant its use. At Kage//S-Rank level, Saga is only able to cancel up to S-ranked jutsu at the cost of an S-ranked jutsu.
Name: Seken no Itami (World of Pain) Rank: A Rank Range: Medium(5-10meters), Far (10meters+) Jutsu Type: Genjutsu Elemental Affinity: None Clan: None Description: This Genjutsu stops time momentarily after activation and quickly alters reality around the enemy, Once they are caught within this serene technique, the enemy will see the world in reds, purples and blacks, shades of the deepest anger and pain. Those feelings, those terrible thoughts burst forth like an inferno inside of a garden. Pain, anguish, torment and anger rage over the enemy as their body begins to suffer. Pain grabs them and shakes, their nerves bursting with horrible sensation. At the same time, a sense of drowning, fluid in the lungs, breath never drawing enough air, all overwhelm them like daggers in the gut. Unable to move or hardly suffer through this torture the enemy will be forced to partake in this mindless world of madness, feeling only the horrors until the technique is released. Though it does not have a set time frame, this technique (unless it is broken) will last until the user is 30 meters (roughly 100 feet) away from the enemy, at which time they will then be able to break away from the technique. But while they are still within that range it will be very difficult to do.
Name: Chikaku Omoi Seichuu (Near Mind Control) Rank: A Rank Range: Medium(5-10meters), Far (10meters+) Jutsu Type: Genjutsu Elemental Affinity: None Clan: None Description: This technique is a very unique one with an equally unique purpose. Activated first and then maintained via a focusing sign, this technique can be used for long periods of time up to a whole hour, as long as the user is within 30 meters (roughly 100 feet) of the target. Basically, this technique continues a very subtle illusion that can be altered slightly at demand. For example, the illusion would be cast and the enemy would be facing the user, now say the enemy attacks. The user would manipulate the illusion to have attacks being used in his defence, to have his body move to the side or even come back to life. This essentially allows the user to maintain close range combat without taking any direct damage for as long as he can maintain focus on his illusion and his own body. The more targets ensnared in this technique, the more the illusion costs to maintain, increasing exponentially. Therefore, it is more useful to use the technique against one enemy, as the technique becomes much harder to use due to the focus needed and the chakra required to maintain the jutsu. If the user is struck during this technique the illusion will come to an end. Also, the mental backlash will most likely be enough to down the user, meaning they will be helpless for a few seconds while they recover.
Giji Shunshin Kison no Jutsu [False Body Flicker Assassination Technique] Rank: C. Range: Close to Mid. Jutsu Type: Genjutsu. Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Description: A Genjutsu technique that creates the illusion of a flawless clone that suddenly disappears and reappears in an instant behind the target with a weapon of some sort to the throat of the user. Since this is an illusion it of course poses no threat to the target but because of the sudden and threatening nature of the technique few even bother to consider this as it takes a special person to gamble with their life. This technique is primarily used to force the target or adversary into making mistakes they usually wouldn’t in a normal situation.
Name: Daichikousaku —[Ninja Art: Earth Maneuvering] Rank: C Nature: Ninjutsu Element: Doton [Earth Release] Range: Supplementary Description: This allows the user to transmogrify parts of their body in order to combine into the earthen substances beneath them. This can be anything from their legs, an arm, or even their entire body in order to avoid an attack. Once underground, they can further manipulate the mineralized compounds that surround the changed parts of their body, allowing them to separate the resistance within their movements while concealed in order to reach new heights in speed that would be impossible to achieve while not attuned with these substances. In short time, they can appear behind an opponent to counterattack them. Most of the time, Subi changes mostly his feet and shins in order to capitalize on the change in velocity that wouldn’t have came from simply running. Because chakra is involved to remove this friction, it can be used as a catalyst to propel the user forward in order to reach their intended destination in shorter time. The user may also temporarily alter objects or bodyparts of lesser size, pulling them underneath the earth as well. Because the opponent would be unable to maneuver, force is required.
Name: Arijigoku no Jutsu —[Earth Release: Antlion Technique] Rank: C Nature: Ninjutsu Element: Doton [Earth Release] Range: All Ranges Description:This technique wqill cause the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked inwards, toward the middle of a large pit. It is named after the method in which an antlion uses to catch their prey. Upon being dragged into the center of the construct, the victim will then be plunged underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user causes them to sink, will be trapped or possibly even suffocated. The range is determined by the output of chakra.
Name: Doton: Doryuu Heki (Earth Release: Earth Style Wall) Rank: B Rank Range: Close(0-5meters) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Doton (Earth) Clan: None Description:After forming a series of handsigns, this technique becomes activated. They can either spew mud on the ground or focus the stuff at their feet. The technique deals with manipulating the earth in an area to form a large mud and stone wall before them to defend them from incoming attacks. Once the hand seals are complete, a large earthen wall will rise before them and grow so that it completely protects their front side. In the case of Saga, the wall has a very prominent face built into it, that of the Saga himself. Looming over the wall he looks out at the battlefield. It is more of an influence than anything else, but the face may one day serve another purpose. The wall is no more than 20 feet tall.
Name: Doton: Kujo Jakunen (Earth Release: Desolate Destruction) Rank: A Rank Range: Far (10meters+) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Doton (Earth) Clan: None Description: This technique is one that requires the essence of the Saga’s Earth powers in order to be used. The technique involves no handsigns. After focusing earth chakra into a hand the user will slam it down and thin lines will be drawn along the ground out to 50 meters, with the Saga being at the center of the blast. Suddenly, a ring of earth will crack within this pattern and earth will either rise or fall up to 20 feet, and that process will be repeated every 10 meters of so until the entire field around the user has been mixed and jumbled with different levels of earth chakra, some high and some low, the field now one mess of stone and soil. This makes the field incredible difficult to traverse on, having no form or function to the landscape, a complete chasm of chaos before the enemy. This technique is meant to control the battlefield for both good and bad, changing the entire dynamic of the fight in one move.
Name: Boufuu Oshiken :: [Gale Pressure Fist] Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Range: Close [0-5m] Clan: - Description: Boufuu Oshiken :: [Gale Pressure Fist] is a technique utilizing the wind element. First, the shinobi utilizing this technique will perform a hand sign that releases the chakra within their body. They will then pool the chakra into the palm of one or both of their hands, and then pour their own wind natured chhakra into the mix. The user will then pressurize the wind, compacting it to make the force truly incredible. When the user is ready to unleash the attack, they will stop pressurizing the air and unleash it in one, intense burst that has the power to shatter bones on direct contact. However, this technique cannot be thrown and must be thrust forward like a punch towards their opponent. One has to be careful that the attack is not redirected, for the blow back properties can prove to be dire for the one utilizing this technique.
Name: Boufuu Oshibenso :: [Gale Pressure Defense] Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Range: Close [0-5m] Clan: - Description: Boufuu Oshibenso :: [Gale Pressure Defense] is a technique utilizing the Wind element. It is a defensive technique that allows the user to expel a pressurized gust of air from their body to repel attacks and techniques. The gust of air holds the cutting properties as well as the blunt properties of concussive wind. To perform the technique, the user will perform two hand seals to release the chakra within his body. He will then gather a pressurized film of air around his entire person through the manipulation of his Wind natured chakra. By then releasing the film in an instant, a great concussive blast will expel from the user for about five meters in every direction before dissipating. The weakness in this technique, however, as that should a mass hold enough weight it cannot be repelled by the concussive blast [Ex. A building or incredibly large boulder cannot be repelled by the technique]. The technique also lacks any sort of control of the chakra being forced out of the body, and could prove to be a costly expenditure of power if used in quick succession.
Name: Bouhuu Oshihanma :: [Gale Pressure Hammer] Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Range: Mid [0-10m] Clan: - Description: Bouhuu Oshihanma :: [Gale Pressure Hammer] is a technique that utilizes the great concussive forces of the Wind element. It is an offensive jutsu that allows the user create a great gale of pressurized wind to fall on their opponent, not only dealing cutting damage but great blunt damage at the same time. To utilize the technique, the user will perform two hand seals to release the chakra within his body. He will then gather a pressurized vortex of hair into his palm much like the technique Boufuu Oshiken :: [Gale Pressure Fist]. However, the uses of the pressurized vortex is different. By leaping above the opponent, the user of this technique can aim to vortex and release the forces pressurizing the air to create a pillar of swirling, concussive air to expel from their hand towards their opponent. Should the opponent become trapped inside, they will suffer from severe cuts and blunt trauma. However, the accuracy of the technique is very low and must be used strategically to be placed in a position that allows for the best use.
Name: Boufuu Oshikadou :: [Gale Pressure Vortex] Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Range: Mid [0-10m] Clan: - Description: Boufuu Oshikadou :: [Gale Pressure Vortex] is a technique that utilizes a pressurized form of air through art of Fuuton :: [Wind Release]. By pressurizing the air in a certain area and then giving it a centripetal mobility, the user of the technique can create a great vortex of air that sucks objects and opponents into should they not have the proper grounding. To perform the technique, the user will perform two hand seals to release the chakra within his body. He will then gather a pressurized vortex of hair into his palm much like the technique Boufuu Oshiken :: [Gale Pressure Fist]. However, the difference in this technique lies within the controlling of the pressurized air as opposed to the releasing of it as in the technique's sister techniques. By placing the ball of pressurized air in a given area and then spin it, the user will create a powerful vortex of air in that given area. The vortex has the strongest powers of suction from about a ten meter radius; any farther than that will prove to be useless. The shinobi utilizing this technique will usually launch the pressurized air at an area or opponent so as not to be trapped within their own technique and to give it the rotating qualities it needs to successfully gain its vortex-like nature. The greatest weakness in this technique is the proximity the target must fall into to be trapped by the technique and the possibility of trapping oneself within it. The vortex can be dissipated at any time through the use of a release hand seal by the user.
Name: Fuuton: Hageshii Daitoppa [Wind Release: Violent Great Breakthrough] Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Range: Mid [0-10m] Clan: - Description: This technique creates a large explosion of wind from the user’s location, easily leveling everything in its path. This is accomplished by literally inhaling chakra and congealing it in the user’s lungs, creating an expanse of air that combines itself with the oxygen that surrounds them into an immense, destructive gust. This technique is pliable to other elements as well, such as fire, and may be used in conjunction with these elements in order to increase the strength and destructive ability of the release. As it is naturally strong against weapon and lightning-based techniques, it can make such offenses harmless.
Name: Dappida Rank: C Range: Close Range (0-5m) | Supplementary Jutsu Type: Akujutsu Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Description: This is a versatile Akujutsu that results in the formation of slender blades that protrude out from Saga's body. The blades are no thicker then an average katana, being black in appearance, though usually red along were a blood-drip would be found. To perform this technique no hand-signs are required for this technique so long as Saga can provide a high sense of concentration in performing this move and keeps these blades localized around the hands. These blades are incredible dense being as strong as steel in strength. Most commonly, these blades protrude from the knuckles in pairs of threes, usually being roughly a foot in length. On average, unless greater amounts of chakra are added to this techniques, the blades can be no longer then this. However, being so skilled in his high rank, Saga is not limited to only forming these blades at the knuckles, being able to protrude them from any part of his body. The skin around were these blades protrude becomes red with discomfort.
Name: Cognitive Dissonance Rank: B Nature: Genjutsu Element: - Range: 10-15 Description: A fairly useful and interesting genjutsu that affects one's cognitive abilities and directly targets the brain. By interrupting the way that the brain receives and transmits information from one neuron to the next, the user can consequently rewrite the way the target's brain handles such information. By switching the roles of words and actions, they can instantly confuse the enemy by making their body like a puzzle that is extremely difficult to figure out. Any action that the target wishes to perform can no longer be done from thought and impulse alone, but by way of words. And any word that is to be spoken comes directly from thinking of it. In other words, the way the target speaks and performs actions is re versed as far as the process goes. This can be quite confusing, though it won't necessarily hinder anyone for very long.
Name: Kazehimei (Wind Scream) Rank: S Rank Range: Supplementary, Close (0-5meters), Medium (5-10meters), Far(10meters+) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Wind Clan: None Description:This is Saga's greatest Jutsu in his own opinion, and the one that has done more for him than any other. It isn’t known if it could even be taught. This Jutsu is the basis of all his skill and he credits his ability to it. Starting out as the culmination of a young Saga’s abilities, it was developed so that Saga could use the “Kaze no Yaiba” at any time with any part of his body without handsigns or concentration. Saga first create a technique that after forming the needed handsigns, he would be given a brief amount of time during which his body would form wind chakra only instead of normal chakra, this removed his need to focus on creating the substance. Using this ideal, Saga learned to “flip the switch” in his mind and instantaneously create wind chakra without focusing. This Jutsu is now activated by mere thought, as if switching a gear in Saga's mind. It works by changing the creation of chakra from "simple" chakra to wind chakra. In effect causing Saga to create Wind chakra automatically when he deems fit. Also, it can switch a given amount of already produced normal chakra into Wind chakra.
As Wind-affiliated chakra cannot be stored Saga must quickly release this chakra and deactivate the move. Later in his life however, Saga was able to store portions of the Wind Chakra inside his body to create even more powerful techniques (of which only three exist). Before, the move was limited to the "Kaze no Yaiba" and it allowed him to use that deadly move at any time by moving his body, however it can now encompass all of Saga’s wind type moves. The result is, in an instant Saga can release any of his wind attacks of from any point on his body, or from his mouth. Then he may switch back to normal chakra with all this happening instantaneously inside his body at the cost of stamina alone. So, Saga could breath in air and release any of his wind moves without handsigns as if he were breathing normally.
The Wind Scream also allows him to create a moving barrier around him to block ranged attacks. Over the course of his training Saga has learned how to better manipulate this ability, and took it from its own technique down to a simple addition. By focusing Wind Chakra in his hand and moving it, Saga releases Wind Chakra around him and it circulates, creating an effective, transient shield. He can choose to exude the chakra from his mouth and manipulate it to cover him like a barrier, effectively taking more chakra and concentration.
The technique is truly amazing. With only a mental switch Saga will turn his chakra into wind chakra and create some of the many known techniques that have been entitled “Wind Scream Style”. Then by storing some inside of his body he can create the Fuujin Collection of Jutsu for extremely powerful wind techniques. However, this technique is not perfect, in fact at this point some of Saga’s chakra is always turning into wind chakra and being wasted away around him as simply wind. This does allow him to use some of his most potent Jutsu however, though he must physically stop the flow in order to end the wind forming around him. So, really this technique has taken its toll on the man, who for all means would never have to worry about using chakra. Now, this ability has given him a defined limit, which really removes his greatest strength. However, he still has such a large amount of chakra that the amount is higher than that of Naruto’s or Kisame’s.
Name: Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Scream) Rank: A Rank Range: Close (0-5meters), Medium (5-10meters), Far (10meters+) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Wind Clan: None Description: “Kaze no Yaiba” is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Saga. After forming the needed hand seal, a cutting whirlwind will envelop his opponent and cut them to pieces. Unlike a real sword which can face resistance, the wind blade will be able to slice with little difficulty. This move has become the basis of Saga's Ninjutsu style, and is the favorite move of the young Hokage. It is and has been his most used technique since it was taught to him at a young age during his incarceration as an experiment. Everything he has created has come from this one Jutsu, and he owes it everything. Of course, as known he can use this technique in an instant with any part of his body, something he usues frequently.
Name: Kazehimei: Sensei’s Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Scream: Teacher’s Blade of Wind) Rank: A Rank Range: Close (0-5meters), Medium (5-10meters), Far (10meters+) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Wind Clan: None Description: The Kaze no Yaiba” is the Ninjutsu technique that made our hero Saga famous. After forming the needed hand seal, a cutting whirlwind will envelop his opponent and cut them to pieces; or at least that was the intent. The sheer skill Saga developed with the technique and the style he built around the Jutsu removed his need for concentration, opening up new doors. Unlike a real sword which can face resistance, the wind blade will be able to slice with little difficulty. This move had become the basis of Saga's Ninjutsu style, and is the favorite move of the young Hokage. It is and has been his most used technique since it was taught to him at a young age during his incarceration as an experiment. Everything he has created has come from this one Jutsu, and he owes it everything. Of course, as known he can use this technique in an instant with any part of his body, something he uses frequently. But, because of this, Saga was fortunate enough to create his own version. Keeping with his tradition of recreating older techniques, Saga formed his own Wind Blade. Still, usable throughout his whole body, this blade is much sharper than those of the original. With a slicing motion of his body the technique will be launched up to 30 feet from his current location, but that is not the strongest asset. Besides the increase in range, S’s agablade of wind has a kink in it make it appear much like a dart that explodes outward on contact, much like a hollow-point. The downside is drain of this technique. Saga’s attack takes much more chakra than a regular “Wind Blade”, meaning he cannot use them continuously like the previous. After about 8 of these attacks Saga will no longer have enough chakra to use anymore. However, each one of these is especially lethal, and can penetrate barriers below its skill level.
Name: Kazehimei: Kazetoku (Wind Scream: Wind Shielding Shelter) Rank: A rank Range: Close (0-5meters) Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Wind Clan: None Description: The Wind Scream also allows him to create a moving barrier around him to block ranged attacks. Over the course of his training Saga has learned how to better manipulate this ability, and took it from its own technique down to a simple addition. By focusing Wind Chakra in his hand and moving it, Saga releases Wind Chakra around him and it circulates, creating an effective, transient shield. He can choose to exude the chakra from his mouth and manipulate it to cover him like a barrier, effectively taking more chakra and concentration. This is simply the technique that Saga has attributed to this ability. It requires only that he drag his hands, laden in wind chakra across his body to create a transient shield. He can in fact surround his body by glowing the chakra from his mouth or spinning much like the Hyuuga. This technique is excellent against weapons and projectiles, but does serve against low level Ninjutsu outside of the fire element. The stable defensive Jutsu in Saga’s short list, he uses it when he deems fit. The main drawback is the focus; Saga is not able to perform other wind techniques when using this, meaning he must stop all other techniques in order to defend himself in this manner.
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Name: Fukakouryoku [ | Act of God | ] Rank: S Range: Close-Far Range (0-500m) Jutsu Type: Akujutsu Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Description: This is the most powerful of any technique that Saga has learned, and is the peak of Akujutsu abilities. This technique contains immense power, but at a deadly price, for this technique cannot be performed without the sacrifice of life. For this technique, Saga must center his chakra within him, using nearly the full amount of chakra in order to perform this technique. Being that it takes time to gather this chakra, this technique does not take effect until this post after it is begun, and for the full length of this charge stage Saga must remain motionless, his hands held in a clutched towards his heart, the center of his chakra. When ready, Saga’s arm will part, sending out a visible blast of chakra in all directions that will form a massive dome across the already as it reaches out the full range of this technique. Everything within this field is effected, and there is no control over this that prevents someone within this dome from being affected.
Kousei [ | Rebirth | ] This is the first possible outcome for this technique, and when this is activated, the dome that forms will be a white one. This technique revives everyone that has died within the field of effect so long as they have not been dead for longer then 24 [IC] hours. The bodies of these people will be fully restored, as will the wounds of living people within the field that are not being resurrected. However, being that this technique has no control over whom it affects, even opponents will be restored by this technique. The sacrifice for this technique is a human life, one that, once sacrificed, cannot be resurrected by any means, or ever again accessed in either the physical or spiritual realm. A willing participant may be substituted for Saga’s life in the case of resurrection, but this cannot be an NPC. If no one has come forth as a substitute, this technique will claim Saga’s own life. However, if Saga is not the one sacrificed, he will be placed within a coma that will last a fully eight [IC] weeks.
Keiji [ | Apocalypse | ] This is the second possible outcome for this technique, and when this is activated the dome that forms will be a black one. This technique is the reverse of the first possible outcome, as the technique kills everyone within the field of effect, instantly killing all targets as the dome passes over them in the blink of an eye, so that there is not even pain. I this technique is used, the sacrificed life will be Saga, who will never again be able to be revived, and will pass from existence in both the physical and spiritual realm.
Name: Hidama no Katto Rank: A Range: Close-Long Range (0-30m) | Supplementary Jutsu Type: Akujutsu Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Description: This is a advanced Akujutsu that was originally intended to be used alongside the Feng Huo Lun, Wind and Fire Wheels. This technique works similar to the sand manipulation of the Shukaku host in that it involves more chakra control within an element of a demon. However, the technique was actually inspired by a former wind technique that Saga possessed, known as the Rotating Shuriken. To begin this technique the Saga will first create the Feng Huo Lun blades from his chakra. They will be coated in the bluish white flame of the Demon's Gape, and while the blades will still be visible through this translucent ghostly flame, they will become eerie in appearance. The flame itself is able to burn those it comes in contact with, but since it does not extend far past the metal of the blades, the cutting strength of the weapons is not distracted from. On its own, the Demon's Gape does not possess the needed qualities to make these bladed wheels spin as the fuuton nature of Ryuu's past did, and so if thrown with just the Demon's Gape the blades will travel in a normal path, and the relative chakra cost of this technique will decrease to the level of a D-ranked technique. However, the main part of this technique is not the ghostly flames, but the manipulation of Saga's own soul. While the Demon's Gape coats the outside of the flames, the dark chakra of is channeled into the blades themselves along with temporary fragments of Saga's own soul. With his souls within the blade, Saga is able to control the paths these rapidly spinning blades in much of the same way that he is able to control the swords that have been infused with the power of the Demon's Gape. To control these blades, Saga must direct him with his hands, much like the Shukaku host directs the sand he/she manipulates. This prevents Saga from forming hand-signs when this technique is active, other then the one hand-sign that is needed in order to cause the splitting of the blades. Once unleashed, the blades will appear as bright bluish white spinning disc that possess amazing cutting abilities from the rapidness of the spinning momentum. Furthermore, Saga is able to command the chakra of the Demon's Gape within the blades to split chakra from them. This creates multiple equal sized discs composed of Demon's Gape chakra and the Demon's Gape flame. While these division do not possess the same cutting strength as the truly physical blades, only have a relative strength of a half inch cut, this does allow for Safa to potentially overwhelm the opponent with immense power from the mini disc, imploding with a burst of chakra. Only doing minor damage enough for Saga to capitalize. To split the blades removes some of the base Demon's Gape chakra within the physical blades themselves, and so the number of discs that can be created is limited. In a single use, each blade could only spawn a maximum of fifty discs. However, the more discs that are split from the original blades, the weaker each disc becomes, eventually only possesses a burning nature to the target while presenting no cutting nature whatsoever. Discs that are composed entirely of the Demon's Gape chakra disperse when a direct hit is landed, sending a ripple of chaotic spiritual energy into the target that destroys some chakra through the removal of spiritual energy from the target. However, it takes roughly three discs to equal a typical C-ranked level amount of chakra, and even when the spiritual energy is removed from the target, no physical energy is deprived, thus not distracting from such things as physical movement and taijutsu. While this technique, if used to create multiple discs, is extremely taxing to Saga's concentration, the main downside of the technique is that Saga must make contact again with his Feng Hou Lun chakra blades in order to re-assimilate the fragment of his soul that had been channeled into them. If this is not done, either because the blades were destroyed or he was prevented from grasping onto them, then the fragments of soul will be lost to Saga, and he will suffer the complexities of an incomplete soul that once plagued him. These complexities affect his consciousness to result in dementia.
History: [ A River is Born ] A silent wind blew through the cold shacks that was Lightning Country. Many of the shacks were beaten down by the weather. Such was a familiar sight in the outer villages of Kumogakure. the weather was harsh, and many were taken by disease or the beasts that roamed the land. For those that are lucky enough to survive, they are stricken with poverty. It was a common sight to have many shacks within a village breaking down. Their former caretakers no where to be found, either taken by the land, or they left the village for a better place. Their loose boards hang waiting for the enviable day that they will fall. Their insides covered by frost, the food that was left behind, hardened by the cold. The only thing taking shelter in them, being the occasional stray animal, but they too don't last very long. However within all this strife and pain, there is also hope. Hope that lies within the new generation. What would be a harsh world for the last generation, the new one always makes look like merely a bump in the path. On such a day as this, is born one such child. Within the warmth of a home owned by a young couple, was born a small child. His hair a calming blue, like the rivers of a long forgotten paradise. His eyes shined like a clear ocean beneath the tears. He was born on but an average day, in a town of cold. Although just like all children in this world, his destiny was not set in stone. Could he escape this town, this world of prolonged death? If so, what did his future hold, and what mark would he leave on this world? [ Into the Ocean of Ice ] Years past, just as the snow drifts farther into the village. What was at one time a bustling village, is now reduced to but a few shacks, filled with only small families. Other homes have collapsed, and the creatures that roam the permafrost have made it a habit to venture into the town from time to time. Food was becoming scares, and those areas filled with proper food, were under constant protection from the wild beasts. This village was finally on it's breaking point. A young child stood outside. His body wrapped in thick clothes. His face flushed with a pink tone. In his hands held a small knife and a piece of wood. Bit by bit he shaved away at the wood. A simple hobby to keep his mind active. He was one of the few children left int he village. However, as much as he wished he was unable to play with them. The others were all sick in bed, fevers constantly wrecking their bodies. That's why he made this small charms. He wished with all his heart they would get better, they were his only friends. If they were gone he would have no one else. He would be alone. The sun set once again. the night chilled his bones, even as he slept in his warm bed. His dreams were the only things in this village that weren't tainted by the village. He dreamed of endless fields and beaches. The warm vibrant sun beaming down upon him. He ran across the sands and grass into the arms of his mother and father. The next day came. When he woke he found his mother standing over top of him. She was dressed heavily, and as he looked around he saw many bags and cases stacked up. The rumors he was hearing were becoming true. The village was finally going to be abandoned. He stumbled out of the house, his tiny hands trying to hold up a heavy case. He looked around outside. The others have also gathered their belongings. From what his mother told him, they were all going to Kirigakure. Although it is a place that is still covered with snow, it's living conditions were better. The rest of the village was going to join together to get a small house for them to live in. They also hoped to find a good doctor to help the sick. He was but only a child, but he wanted the do his best to help everyone. They were all he had. [ The Flow of Future ] The times were easier, but the weather was just as harsh. While traveling he had lost a friend. Her fever heighten, and she passed away. The boy had been surrounded with deaths like this all his life, so seeing it was nothing new. However the last thing any of them wanted to do was bury someone as soon as they arrived, especially one of the children. His parents named him Saga. At times he wondered if it was just because they were hungry, and all they had left was fish. He had asked once, but he never understood the story they told him. All he knew was in some way they were saved by just one small fish. Maybe in some way, they felt that he would save someone, and be that symbol of courage for them. It didn't take long for the boy's family to recruit him into the Ninja Academy in Kirigakure. They didn't do it for the adventure, they did it for the boy. In the academy were things he might not be able to get from his family. As well the family didn't have much skills to teach the boy, and starting him on a path like this was the best thing they could provide him with. It didn't take too long for the boy to be ridiculed. He came for a poor family. His tools, nothing more then left overs from a battle, or objects found lying on the ground. The others looked down on him, like he was nothing but scum. Once again he was alone. His friends from the village, still stuck in beds with fevers. Their bodies far from being able to do anything like be a ninja. Saga was scared, he felt alone in these halls. Within this city he felt more death then in his old village. A year had past. The boy was gifted today. While he was scared before, he found a bit of courage. His friends pushed him forward, telling him how much they believed him him. They told him, no matter where they were they were connected in their hearts. so no matter what, he would never be alone. With this strength he pushed forward, and finally he got something that showed how much he had grown. As well he proved to himself that perhaps he wasn't so alone after all. This sleek band of metal wrapped around his fore-head, he began to believe in himself more. Today he was on a new path, one of a shinobi. RP Sample: [ Moments Prior ] Trees...the forest...what appeared to be the anti-thesis of the ocean and water was actually more similar to it than most would ever know. A cursor clicked an icon in a visual image that was being projected inside the man's head, the window that popped up showed a picture of a similar forest, one that resided within Hoshigakure no Sato, the Land of Bears. Another window popped up beside the first, this one depicted a shoreline of one of the beaches of Hoshigakure no Sato, the Land of Bears. Each picture contained a sizable amount of text next to it. This text bore all of the man's thoughts, experiences and recorded facts about these places, just as the pictures were what his own eyes had once seen. The ocean, water in general, ebbed and flowed with time no matter where it resided. The forest, trees, it too had an ebb and a flow to it, though concealed from the lifetime of just one being. The leaves changed and moved as the winds carried them from tree to tree. The man couldn't help but think he was somewhat related to the leaves. Having wandered for so long, one couldn't help but think that they too were being guided by the winds that blew at their backs... | |
| | | Seishin
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| Subject: Re: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:16 am | |
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| Subject: Re: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:35 am | |
| Name: Fukakouryoku [ | Act of God | ] Rank: S Range: Close-Far Range (0-500m) Jutsu Type: Akujutsu Elemental Affinity: - Clan: - Description: This is the most powerful of any technique that Saga has learned, and is the peak of Akujutsu abilities. This technique contains immense power, but at a deadly price, for this technique cannot be performed without the sacrifice of life. For this technique, Saga must center his chakra within him, using nearly the full amount of chakra in order to perform this technique. Being that it takes time to gather this chakra, this technique does not take effect until this post after it is begun, and for the full length of this charge stage Saga must remain motionless, his hands held in a clutched towards his heart, the center of his chakra. When ready, Saga’s arm will part, sending out a visible blast of chakra in all directions that will form a massive dome across the already as it reaches out the full range of this technique. Everything within this field is effected, and there is no control over this that prevents someone within this dome from being affected.
Kousei [ | Rebirth | ] This is the first possible outcome for this technique, and when this is activated, the dome that forms will be a white one. This technique revives everyone that has died within the field of effect so long as they have not been dead for longer then 24 [IC] hours. The bodies of these people will be fully restored, as will the wounds of living people within the field that are not being resurrected. However, being that this technique has no control over whom it affects, even opponents will be restored by this technique. The sacrifice for this technique is a human life, one that, once sacrificed, cannot be resurrected by any means, or ever again accessed in either the physical or spiritual realm. A willing participant may be substituted for Saga’s life in the case of resurrection, but this cannot be an NPC. If no one has come forth as a substitute, this technique will claim Saga’s own life. However, if Saga is not the one sacrificed, he will be placed within a coma that will last a fully eight [IC] weeks.
Keiji [ | Apocalypse | ] This is the second possible outcome for this technique, and when this is activated the dome that forms will be a black one. This technique is the reverse of the first possible outcome, as the technique kills everyone within the field of effect, instantly killing all targets as the dome passes over them in the blink of an eye, so that there is not even pain. I this technique is used, the sacrificed life will be Saga, who will never again be able to be revived, and will pass from existence in both the physical and spiritual realm.
No. Other than that Approved unless I've misread something or another Mod says otherwise. | |
| | | Seishin
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| Subject: Re: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:58 am | |
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| | | Revy Izumi
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| Subject: Re: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Sat Jul 09, 2011 1:35 am | |
| You can continue RPing, but seems to me like this app wasn't thoroughly inspected when it was approved. It's not unapproved, as of now, but I'd like to get a better understanding of some of the things you have on here.
Your special characteristics, under the granted abilities. "He may also draw on Ranryu and Kabuto’s congealed chakra reserves in direct correlation with All Life Submits technique."
Would that mean you have access to 3 different full size chakra pools? | |
| | | Seishin
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| Subject: Re: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Sat Jul 09, 2011 4:06 am | |
| No, I have only 2. I have my own chakra reserves, and then I have Ranryu and Kabuto’s chakra reserves. I works much like the Jinchuuriki's chakra exchange with their Bijuu. The more chakra I use from them, the more chakra is taken from me. Once I get into a weakened state or my chakra reserves run low, i automatically alter or go into a shit of personality. Which should notify you that Ranryu & Kabuto are taking over my body. If successful my character would only be a puppet to Ranryu & Kabuto and be personified by true evil. Its nothing but mere personality changes, which contribute to my characters plot. | |
| | | Revy Izumi
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| Subject: Re: The Apex Predator: Sagano "Saga" Edou Seishin Sat Jul 09, 2011 2:33 pm | |
| Well, elendril said to remove the second chakra pool thing. Not sure if you did already, or not.
And Genjutsu is your third skill specialty i take it? | |
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