Yakuza Uchiha (Done)

Posts : 2 Join date : 2011-07-09

Name: Yakuza Uchiha
Nickname/Alias: (A to S rank Village shinobi or Missing Ninja only.)
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Looks:Uchiha in heart, Uchiha in mind, and, once again, Uchiha in body. As Yakuza had first stripped himself of his identity, in order to hide, he now aimed to do the exact opposite. The young boy has grown quite a bit in two long, difficult years. He has maintained his lithe and thin appearance, but his body has almost filled out completely with powerful muscles. Yakuza supports a broad set of shoulders with a thin waist. Perhaps the new most striking features about his body are the new tattoos that run along his back and left arm and another tattoo that appears at the base of his neck. The first tattoo forms the appearance of a dragon, crossing and twisting over his abdomen and arm. That tattoo on the back of his neck is a circle which supports the kanji for "Fire" within its borders. Yakuza now rises to an even 5'7" at 150 pounds of pure muscle.

During this period of growth, Yakuza's face and features have certainly changed. His chin now forms a more well defined, slopping jawline and his face has become slightly less gaunt. Yakuza supports a somewhat thin nose and a dark set of eyes, that have changed from a light gray to a much darker, color-intensive gray. Yakuza, removing the Fuuinjutsu that had changed his hair color, has now returned to his natural black. Yakuza has cut his hair as well, leaving him a long set of bangs that run to about his jaw. The remainder of his hair comes to about the base of his neck and Yakuza always, always puts it into a small, stubby ponytail with neutral colored band. Yakuza's ears peak out from behind his hair because of the new separation.

Personality: [ |General Personality| ]

Yakuza has, shall we say, changed a bit from his early years. He is still a determined individual, almost to a fault, but he is much more cautious now. Yakuza still trains as hard as ever in order to become stronger than his sister, Hitomi, but that no longer seems to matter. Yakuza knows that he will end his life, if the time comes, but not by some sense of justice or retribution. It is more simply that it must, and should, be done. Yakuza no longer defines his life by his sister or what she had done and now leads himself toward more fulfilling activities. Yakuza will do nearly anything for his friends and his allies. Yakuza, much like when he was young, thrives under pressure and still pushes against his destiny. Yakuza has maintained his strength in counters. He will analyze his opponents and find their weaknesses and their strengths. Once his has identified them properly he capitalizing on one and attempts to counter the other.

Yakuza is now so more than ever a very intelligent boy. Every where he travels Yakuza attempts to read a book or some type of literature. Yakuza has trained himself to rapidly absorb information and analyze it quickly. Yakuza has a very good memory, if not quite photographic, and can pull up data from a variety of sources for his use. Yakuza has also reduced his thinking from being quite so linear. Yakuza can also see the "gray area" of things and can now wrap his mind around more complex and complicated issues. Yakuza has calmed down a bit from his Genin and Academy days and can now sit still for long periods of time. Yakuza still focuses his attention on productive things, but he has much more geared himself toward a relaxing lifestyle. Though, Yakuza is not truly relaxed. He is still a rather sensitive boy at heart and though he was attempted to harden himself from the world... Yakuza cannot deny it completely. Yakuza has still maintained his intense pride from a young age, but he is now able to better control it.

[ |Personality Regarding Combat| ]

Yakuza lives for combat. He is a reckless fighter and often takes dangerous chances for victory. Yakuza has a high physical resistance and has faith in his will to push him forward. Yakuza's mind is also tailored to the battlefield. He is a natural tactician and enjoys developing quick, food-hardy plans for immediate victory. In battle Yakuza does not fear anything. He thrives under pressure and enjoys besting bigger and better opponents, especially alone. One could say that Yakuza might be cocky, and that would be mostly true. Yakuza is confident, but it is not without backing. He is a supremely powerful individual and seldom can his opponents avoid his fierce inferno.
Likes & Dislikes: Yakuza likes girls. He loves to flirt and hit on women he meets.He love spas. He dislikes having to fight at all. He dislikes the hyuuga clan for his own reason.He dislikes the kaguya clan as well.
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Clan Name: Uchiha Clan
Kekkei Genkai: haringan Eye Variations
Normal Uchiha Clan Member Eye

The normal eye for an Uchiha clan member resembles any normal human eye with iris, pupil and sclera.
Sharingan partially activated - One Comma

This is the first variation of a partially developed Sharingan eye. The clan members pupil will turn red and develop one of the wheel swirls. When Uchiha Sasuke finally activated his Sharingan, his left eye took this form.
Sharingan partially activated - Two Comma

This is the second variation of a partially developed Sharingan eye. The clan members pupil will turn red and develop two of the wheel swirls. When Uchiha Sasuke finally activated his Sharingan, his right eye took this form.
Sharingan fully activated - Three Comma

This is the final normal form of the Sharingan eye. The clan members pupil will turn red and develop three of the wheel swirls in both eyes. In this form the clan member can read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, learn how the skill is done and then copy it to be used later. This form can also initiate the Mangekyou "Kaleidoscope" form.
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Clan History: Uchiha and Sharingan Information
The Uchiha Clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the Byakugan bloodline and further back to be the heirs of the Rikudou Sennin's eldest son, who is said to have received his father's "eyes" and with it his powerful chakra and spiritual energy. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps, which would incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye such Amaterasu, Kamui, Susanoo and Tsukuyomi. The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.

The clan was founded by Uchiha Madara and his brother Izuna. In the early days of ninja battles, they battled the Senju Clan and eventually both groups came together to form Konoha. When Madara felt the clan was being marginalized by the Senju, he fought Konoha's Hokage and Senju clan leader Hashirama. Madara was defeated and went into hiding. Years later the clan began to become discontent with the village leadership and Madara returned. Before they could launch their insurrection against Konoha, they were wiped out by one of their own, Uchiha Itachi. Only one member from within the clan was spared, Itachi's brother Sasuke. Itachi and later Sasuke would join Madara in his drive to plunge the world into darkness, for their own ends. With Itachi's death as a man willing to sacrifice everything to secretly support Konoha, the final fate of the clan and its future thus rests in the hands of men swearing vengence against their home village.

Country: Suna
Village Rank: Genin
Skill Rank: C

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Special Characteristics: Sharingan
Being of the Uchiha clan,Yakuza was a true successor of the Sharingan, mastering it's genjutsu abilites at such a young age.He would study an opponent's movements with his Sharingan and respond accordingly, often with a genjutsu.Yakuza was often praised for his prowess with genjutsu and could cast it by merely pointing at or looking at someone. He had trained so much with his eyes that he had reached the stage where he could have his Sharingan activated for extended periods of time, with minimal drain on his chakra levels.

Swordsmen Traits
Yakuza lacking in physical strength had to obtain another skill jutsu in case battles got to close range. He created a style of swordsmanship which involves the user rapidly unsheathing his blade to slash the enemies, and then re-sheathing it after completing the attack.He used using it in either a normal or reverse grip.

Flaws/Weaknesses: Though he was skilled with his Shirgan Yakuza was much weaker then most shinobi in strength. He could easily be over power with physcal strength by taijutsu users. The Uchiha was not very strong using physical attacks.

Yakuza's chakra reserves was very smaller then normal shinobi, which was below average.

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Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-07-05

First the distance of all your C-rank jutsu that is greater than 10m will need to be reduced. C-ranked genjutsu cannot have that much range.

Quote :: Nibandou [Second Body]
Rank: C
Range: 25m
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Clan: -
Description: Nibandou is a Genjutsu that is made for diversion purposes. It is a Genjutsu with a pretty basic idea, though actually utilized on the enemy in a believable manner. Yakuza can either make the hand seals required, or use his method of releasing illusions, and at that, a puff of smoke will envelope Yakuza, and nothing will have appeared to have happened. In reality, Yakuza had placed a coupled illusion of making himself invisible to the enemy, while he makes a Bunshin fortified with illusion-esc Chakra to deal a feeling blow. The Bunshin looks exactly like Yakuza, and anything it does will seem real, but none of it is. Yakuza will sneak onto the enemy blindspot, and deal a blow to there to end the illusion and give the opponent real damage. The Bunshin will not take any hits, as it is an illusion, and when hit, will be broken, so it can jump around dodging anything, while Yaukza learns the attack pattern of the opponent and will be able to dodge in real life. This illusion can easily be seen through by Byakugan, Sharingan, and other Technqiues that are meant to see through illusions.

Koushou [Arsenal]
Rank: C
Range: -
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Clan: -
Description: This is one of Yakuza's most complex and Chakra-tolling Genjutsu that he has in his arsenal, and simply from it's vast verity of possibilities, it has been named Koushou. Yakuza will activate this illusion by either hand seals or eye contact with the opponent with the Sharingan, and he will lull the opponent into the illusion. This illusion is often well hidden due to the fact that it doesn't really target an opponent into stopping them, but powers Yakuza up by tricking the opponent in to believing whatever Yakuza is able to do. At his level, Yakuza is unable to trick the opponent in his physical movements, but he is able to make illusions of summonings and Jutsu that he couldn't normally do in real life. He would be able to summon a lion that's poisonous, he would be able to create and control slime, and many other variants of Ninjutsu and Kuchiyose. This is able to be released by the normal method, but Yakuza will be able to utilize his prowess in illusion to keep the opponent from figuring it all out. Note he can only do jutsu his rank and level,him only being a genin only allows him C rank jutsu till he advance.

Fake Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Within Eye Contact
Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Clan: -

Description: Using this genjutsu, a shinobi is able to replicate the appearances of ninjutsu he has witnessed. The target then sees the jutsu as she has seen it, and experiences the painful effects within the illusion, causing imaginary damage. This replication is most effective with ninjutsu that the shinobi has actually been a victim of, as he has experienced the pain. Other ninjutsu he has viewed may have logical consequences (for example, fire burns, wind cuts, etc.) but the results may not be entirely the same. Therefore if the target has been previously hit by that jutsu and the effects do not align, there is a possibility that the illusion will be dispelled.

I am gonna assume that these are jutsu that wlast only during the post it is used in. In fact all jutsu without a post limit will be assumed as such, so if this isnt the case, i suggest adding a post limit. Also Koushou and Fake Ninjutsu seemed very similar except one seems more stronger being to make illusion summons. Koushou seems more like a B-rank due to the amount of false creations it can make as well. Thus making it an unavailable jutsu for you.

Quote :: Shikumi no Jutsu - Death Viewing Technique (Killing Intent)
Character Use: Orochimaru
Rank: -

Shikumi no Jutsu is a technique used to completely stun an opponent. If the target looks into the eyes of the ninja, their mind is suddenly inflicted with intense visions of their own brutal killing. This results in their body going into shock and being unable to move. If the target can physically injure their own body, the pain can be enough to end the paralysis.

A C-ranked jutsu not unranked.

Quote :: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Character Use: Kagari, Mubi, Oboro
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary

Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique
Character Use: Akadou Yoroi
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Special Note: Anime Only

Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

Both are C-ranked jutsu.

Posts : 0 Join date : 2011-07-05

I believe this is copied http://narutoc.phpbbnow.com/viewtopic.php?t=39881

Posts : 2 Join date : 2011-07-09

Edited and removed the B-Rank one

Quote :: Nibandou [Second Body]
Rank: C
Range: [0-10m]
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity: -
Clan: -
Description: Nibandou is a Genjutsu that is made for diversion purposes. It is a Genjutsu with a pretty basic idea, though actually utilized on the enemy in a believable manner. Yakuza can either make the hand seals required, or use his method of releasing illusions, and at that, a puff of smoke will envelope Yakuza, and nothing will have appeared to have happened. In reality, Yakuza had placed a coupled illusion of making himself invisible to the enemy, while he makes a Bunshin fortified with illusion-esc Chakra to deal a feeling blow. The Bunshin looks exactly like Yakuza, and anything it does will seem real, but none of it is. Yakuza will sneak onto the enemy blindspot, and deal a blow to there to end the illusion and give the opponent real damage. The Bunshin will not take any hits, as it is an illusion, and when hit, will be broken, so it can jump around dodging anything, while Yaukza learns the attack pattern of the opponent and will be able to dodge in real life. This illusion can easily be seen through by Byakugan, Sharingan, and other Technqiues that are meant to see through illusions.

That jutsu last till the opponent hit the clone then it will dispel.

Posts : 21 Join date : 2011-07-06

Amaterasu, Susanoo and Tsukuyomi are banned, so there isn't even a reason to post them in the clan jutsu.

Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-07-05

Hmm Ok I see. Just remove the things my colleague has mentioned and your Semi-Approved. You are allowed to rp as normal however your app is under investigation until clarification about true ownership is approved of. If its found that you aren't the owner, you will be banned from the site. Should everything check out, then you will be good to go.

Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-07-05

Denied for Plagiarism.

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